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About Teloz:
An Englishman and proud of it, I've been an avid reader since I first learned to read. I've written much and published little, mainly because I'm my own worst critic, though I did edit a parish magazine for four and a half years, writing regular articles, and editorials.

I rarely recap the story in my reviews, the reader should have read the blurb first, so no point reiterating it, and anyway, the author should have composed the blurb to hook the reader in the first place. In a review, what I feel about the story is what's important.

I try never to let cultural differences affect my review, I know some people can't help it if they can't spell 'colour', or they call a 'lift' an 'elevator'. Luckily, I speak, and read, fluent American!

Just as an aside, talking about the authors blurb, one of the best ways to turn me off a story is to put up a blurb riddled with misspellings, lack of capitalisation, or poor grammar. If you want to sell your story to a reader, the blurb needs as much attention as the whole thing. Just remember APPPP! (A proper précis pulls the punter!)
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Shy Anne Unca D N/A N/A N/A
Destiny Manifested Losgud 9 9 10
Honkytonk Hero Joe J 10 9 10
The Nonentity Tedbiker 9 9 10
The Return of Father Juan happyhugo 9 7 7
Bella Tedbiker 10 9 10
Cecilia and Emily The Wanderer 9 8 10
The Gift Howard Faxon 9 7 10
Shanked WDtales 10 8 10
The Road to Hell WDtales 9 7 10
Cecil Corliss, Young Investor happyhugo 8 9 10
The Magnificent Mysterians DrBill 10 8 10
Photographic Memory GentleButFirm 10 9 10
New Start : Luke's Story mrrx 9 5 10
Naked in School - Bobby and Kathy Night Wolf 8 7 10
Human Phoenix Refusenik 10 9 10
Cousin Professor James 10 9 10
The Hitchhiker Janna Leonard 10 9 10
Abducted! Parthenogenesis 10 9 10
Experiment 36 BarBar 10 9 10
New Friends Halcyon 9 4 8
Captain Gold Porlock 10 9 10
The Lady and the Drifter wordytom 10 8 10
Esther Uncle Jim 10 6 10
Foole's Ambition (Angel Flying Too Close to the Ground) Stultus 10 8 10
A Second Chance to Make It Right Submissive Romantic 8 5 7
Trading Friends sagacious 10 8 10
The Trees Are Alive Tedbiker 10 9 10
Solutions Incorporated Lazlo Zalezac 10 9 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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