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Everyone has problems. There are all kinds of problems. Fortunately, Magus has solutions. WARNING: codes presented refer to content that is referenced, but not described.
Size: 126 KB (23,970 words)
Genre: Mystery
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: gi, Rape, Mystery, Cheating

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

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In the opening scene we have one Karen Osfeld besieged with problems that seem insurmountable. What is Karen to do? While looking in the newspaper she finds an ad for Solutions Incorporated. When she makes an appointment to get help with her problem, she talks to Magus who seems to know all about her situation.

The story takes off from there where we meet Karen’s son Stephen an extremely intelligent high school student who has a chip on his shoulder , Wanda Danzig librarian having to deal with a husband away at war.

Many facets in an exciting story dealing with problems and solutions. What happens to the son? What about Wanda and how does Karen deal with Magus?

Read the story and find Solutions Incorporated has an answer.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


If I was ever going to give a story straight tens, it would be one of Lazlo's stories, and this one in particular. Sadly though, I never, ever, score more than nine for Technical Quality, there's always a typo in there somewhere, even if I don't see it.

Technically, Lazlo gives us the best of the best. Firstly, a unique plot, beautifully conceived; couple that with a delightfully quirky main protagonist, a sense of humour, and a touch of philosophy, and you have one of the brightest stars in the firmament of SOL. A light-hearted story that fizzes in your mind like a good champagne fizzes on your tongue, but without the dry taste. There is, of course, a more fundamental message if you can see it.

The unique product of a fertile mind, the story is beautifully constructed, and romps along far too quickly because the end comes too soon. This is another gold nugget in the dross of mediocrity that is SoL.

The same applies for Boston Solutions Incorporated, the follow-on story that you, dear reader, will be lusting after when you finish reading Solutions Incorporated. Starting where the first story ends, it's yet another romp through the weird world of Magus, and his sidekick Titus.

Read! Enjoy! Bookmark! Read again!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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