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About Teloz:
An Englishman and proud of it, I've been an avid reader since I first learned to read. I've written much and published little, mainly because I'm my own worst critic, though I did edit a parish magazine for four and a half years, writing regular articles, and editorials.

I rarely recap the story in my reviews, the reader should have read the blurb first, so no point reiterating it, and anyway, the author should have composed the blurb to hook the reader in the first place. In a review, what I feel about the story is what's important.

I try never to let cultural differences affect my review, I know some people can't help it if they can't spell 'colour', or they call a 'lift' an 'elevator'. Luckily, I speak, and read, fluent American!

Just as an aside, talking about the authors blurb, one of the best ways to turn me off a story is to put up a blurb riddled with misspellings, lack of capitalisation, or poor grammar. If you want to sell your story to a reader, the blurb needs as much attention as the whole thing. Just remember APPPP! (A proper précis pulls the punter!)
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Tales From Mist World Anotherp08 9 2 8
The Girl Beneath the Skin blacknight99 10 9 10
The Winsome Widow Belinda LaPage 10 9 10
Once Upon an Alien MisguidedChild 10 9 10
Things That Go Hump in the Night Levi Charon 10 9 10
Mina's Children Windy Sales 10 9 10
Cracked Foundations PennLady 9 9 10
Gamer Goddess Tx Tall Tales 10 9 10
Next Sunday Parthenogenesis 10 9 10
A Whore and a Thief StangStar06 9 8 10
Vacation? Dual Writer 9 9 10
Quinn and Kimberly Harris Matt Moreau N/A N/A N/A
The Accidental Nudist Cabin Tx Tall Tales 9 9 10
The Cure Levi Charon N/A N/A N/A
The Prodigal aroslav 10 9 10
A Glimpse Through the Mist of Time Texrep 10 9 10
The Millionaire Next Door Lazlo Zalezac 10 9 10
Pasayten Pete Graybyrd 10 9 10
Wizard Tremaine Rotedrachen 10 8 10
Inside Angela GordTheMonkey 10 9 10
What Took You So Long? Ray1031 10 9 10
Ed happyhugo 10 9 10
Memoirs Of A Young Victorian Lady - Volume I rlfj 9 9 7
Handyman Tedbiker 9 9 10
Soulmates Will Bailey 9 9 10
Baker's Dozen Richmond Road 10 9 10
Mistrusting a Memory Lubrican 10 9 10
Millie's Western Adventure Lubrican 10 9 10
Daughters of Priapus 2 - Reawakenings Athalia 10 9 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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