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Reviews by Jim S
About Jim S:
I'm American, retired and love to read. I've had a love affair with books, more recently digital media, ever since high school.

Storiesonline asks reviewers to grade along the lines of plot, story quality and appeal to the reviewer. This is really a good framework on which to judge any writing. I like stories that have a flow to them from beginning to end, meaning one wrapped around a theme. From there, good English is a must. This means good diction, grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Obvious misspellings or homonymic errors are big no-nos. And "their" instead of "they're"? C'mon. That was taught in high school (if not sooner), right?

I'm mainly here for the erotic stories. I think the stroke stories should be held to the same standards as the less erotic/non erotic ones. Does if have a plot? Is it well written? Does it affect me strongly? When all three are present, you have a good story. Which this reviewer will attempt to impart to the reader. That said, this site offers a wide variety of stories and I'm constantly surprised at the high quality of the writing in many of them.
Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Faithful in Her Fashion RichardGerald 2017-11-07 9 9 8
Empty Nest Lazlo Zalezac 2017-11-05 8 6 8
Hell Followed With Him Michael Erickston 2017-11-04 9 6 7
Ugly American cpete 2017-10-22 N/A 9 8
The Christmas Dream Lostlady 2017-09-18 10 10 8
Always a Marine Ernest Bywater 2017-09-12 9 10 9
Going Straight to Hell Levi Charon 2017-09-11 8 10 9
Castaway Colin Barrett 2017-08-31 8 10 9
A Slow Dance RichardGerald 2017-08-30 9 10 9
Condoms and Pantyhose qhml1 2017-08-21 9 6 10
Change of Life Ann Douglas 2017-04-30 9 10 9
The Caveman Colin Barrett 2016-10-19 8 9 10
A Shitty Way to End a Marriage qhml1 2016-04-27 9 10 8
Whipple Island GMbusman 2016-03-16 7 9 6
Fighting for Family Lazlo Zalezac 2015-09-19 10 10 10
Carla Goes Cougar Lostlady 2015-09-10 9 10 10
Yakima Coaster2 2015-02-26 9 8 4
Suck It Up Lyndon Brown 2015-01-14 9 10 5
Any Soldier Lubrican 2015-01-14 10 10 10
Lifeline Jay Cantrell 2014-12-28 10 9 10
Inspecting the Inspector Lubrican 2014-11-18 10 10 10
Refugees I Lazlo Zalezac 2014-08-14 N/A N/A N/A
You Want Me to What? Thinking Horndog 2014-08-01 10 10 10
Lightning in a Bottle Sage Mullins 2014-07-22 8 6 7
The Making Of A Gigolo (13) - Misty Compton Lubrican 2014-04-22 10 10 10
Out of Focus Flavian 2014-04-22 N/A N/A N/A
Broken Angel wordytom 2014-03-03 9 10 10
A Toast in an Empty Bar Jay Cantrell 2014-01-10 N/A N/A 10
Long Life and Telepathy Paul Phenomenon 2014-01-07 9 10 10
Sacking the Quarterback Al Steiner 2013-12-17 N/A N/A N/A
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer