A Slow Dance by RichardGerald

Author's Description:
An Unfaithful wife and a dead lover. Did the husband do it?
Size: 51 KB ( ~ 9,671 words)
Genre: Mystery
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Reluctant, Rape, Heterosexual, Fiction, Cheating, Revenge, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Workplace

Review by Jim S   [other reviews by Jim S]

Reviewed: 2017-08-30


This is a really good BTB story. The only criticism I can make is that instead of a full burn on the cheating wife, it just leaves her slightly singed. Unjustly so.

Character development is very, very good. Even minor characters are fleshed out enough even though it takes almost the entire story to do so.

The ending is a surprise. It caught me completely unaware but, in retrospect, it shouldn't have. At the end, some characters are hated, one is completely disgusting and some are felt sorry for. At least to this reader. Not bad for a story as short as this one.

Technically, no faults to be found. I'm death on spelling, grammar, homonymic and homophonic errors. There weren't any that I can remember. Proofreaders, if any used, did a good job.

While not a must read, you really won't be disappointed if you do.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9