The Christmas Dream by Lostlady

Author's Description:
When a self centered pawn broker falls asleep while watching "A Christmas Carol" on television, she has a rather strange Dickensian dream.
Size: 55 KB ( ~ 10,430 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Prostitution

Review by Jim S   [other reviews by Jim S]

Reviewed: 2017-09-18


With the Christmas season fast approaching, if you're looking for something to warm you up for the holidays, you might like this slightly irreverent take on the old Dicken's classic "A Christmas Carol".

Somewhat steamy and erotic, it starts off humorous then follows the spirit of Dicken's original to a T. You'll see what I mean if you read it. Which I highly recommend as it's one of those feel-good types that might bring a smile to your face.

I will say that Dicken's never got as erotic as this story does. Still, he wrote then; this is now.

Technically, the writing is good. Spelling and grammar is excellent, no homonymic nor homophonic errors, always a squick for me. It may be a touch underrated but I'd give it a high 7, maybe 8. Enjoy

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8