Simply and outstanding narrative of a short story.
Well laid out, concise and very readable. The plot and what leads up to everything is very believable.
I'll not spoil it.
JUST READ IT ! !!
You'll thank me later.
I almost didn't read this story, and that would've been a real shame. It's a little on the short side, almost more a vignette than a story, but quite good nonetheless.
Technically, it was superior to most stories on the site. While the plot - what there was of one - was good, the characterization was a touch weak in places - a number of characters came off as cardboard. That said, not many stories are capable of causing chills to run down one's spine, and this story can do that in places.
Anyone who hates America, or who hates the military would probably strongly dislike this story. Anyone looking for stroke would be greatly disappointed. Anyone looking for a quick story to read that's just damn good... should try this one, occasional.