A Shitty Way to End a Marriage by qhml1


Description: Straight down the toilet.
Size: 28 KB ( ~ 5,310 words)
Type: Flash
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: 2016-06-17


How would you react if your wife is involved in an affair? Chad, the loving husband, while trying to repair the septic system discovers a sexual problem.

Beth, the wife, is involved in Chads problem. Exploding toilets are also involved in Chads problem. A tremendous read that gets the whole family involved.

'qhml' hits another one out of the park. If you don't read another story this year please pick 'A Shity Way to End a Marriage' by 'qhml' a most fitting end to a shitty marriage.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by Jim S   [other reviews by Jim S]

Reviewed: 2016-04-27


Not your typical cheating wife story. I don't want to say too much other than I like the sense of justice portrayed by the author. Frankly, I laughed out loud at his creative solutions.

IMHO, qhml1's stories are underrated by ~ 0.5 on average. This one is a prime example. For a short story, it provokes a good laugh.

Technically, the story like all of his others is tops. Spelling, punctuation, diction -- all top rate.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8