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About Finbar_Saunders:

I really like reading this stuff. That's about the only qualification I think I have. I don't really know about grammar or spelling except I think I do know what 'looks right.' So, I probably won't be writing much about run-on sentences or complaining about 'passive voice' (whatever that is.)



That does not mean, however, that I am not influenced by the rules as I know them. It's OK to write oddly whilst understanding the rules, I do get a bit bent out of shape when it comes to the puerile ignorance that doesn't even know about spelling and grammar.



I like romance, and I like plot. There's not a lot that truly squicks me. Except torture and sadism and all that stupid attitude that demonstrates that infantile misogynists can still type on a computer.



I am perfectly willing to suspend my disbelief for a good story. I get annoyed when either logic errors or something silly, like flip-flopping tenses pull me rudely from the tale.



I see the role of a reviewer as a way to spotlight the sort of talent that I have enjoyed. I like the fact that we do not produce negative reviews. If you read something in a story which is incorrect, then let the author know. At the worst, you'll get ignored.



I also know how important it is to get feedback about one's work. I am hopeful that the review mechanism will act as a prompt, a kind of springboard to remind readers of their right to send authors their own thoughts too.



Fin

  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
De Minimis Non Curat Lex WTSman 10 9 10
Replay Kaffir 10 10 10
Oceania expresso42 10 10 10
The Soccer Mom Who Saved Earth Lubrican 10 10 10
It Was Supposed to Be a Victory Garden Lazlo Zalezac 9 9 9
Harbingers ObviousPseudonym 9 9 10
Country Boys Lazlo Zalezac 9 9 9
It Was Sexual from the Beginning... GentleButFirm 10 10 10
Sean and Roger - 20 Years On Katzmarek 10 10 10
An Ordinary Teenage Sex Life bluedragon 10 10 10
Kennedy Gina Marie Wylie 10 10 10
Evolutionist Fick Suck 10 10 10
Muleskinner Blues Joe J 10 10 10
Geisha Archibael 10 10 10
Angel's Tale Joreymay 10 10 10
The Last Wish Blues Lubrican 10 10 10
Fairytales Last Forever Qickless 10 10 10
Light and Dark Moghal 10 10 10
The Dragon's Backbone Oz Ozzie 10 10 10
A Show of Reality Bysshe 10 10 10
Second That Emotion Latikia 10 10 10
Perfect Wishes BillyRay 10 10 10
Kinetic hammingbyrd7 10 10 10
Fly On The Wall RPSuch 10 10 7
The Orphanage Blues Lubrican 10 10 10
Colors of the Night Fick Suck 10 10 10
Finding Elvis Wine Maker 10 10 10
The Road to Hell GentleButFirm N/A 10 10
Protect and Serve Paul Phenomenon 10 10 10
Dual Apprenticeship Mack the Knife 10 10 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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