Author's Description:
A young girl who is an addict finds love, magic and redemption in a wilderness adventure.
Size: 236 KB (47,277 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Coercion, Magic, Heterosexual, Fiction

Review by richardshagrin   [other reviews by richardshagrin]

Reviewed:


I have been reading some older stories and this one deserves to be read by more people.

It is not long but it covers a lot of time in a heroines life.

There is some sex and some war and a little magic. If you like the stories I have reviewed before, you should like this one.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by pairadice   [other reviews by pairadice]

Reviewed:


You'd be hard pressed to find a better sword and sorcery story anywhere. it has a lot of bittersweet elements as told by a girl trapped by circumstance.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Finbar_Saunders   [other reviews by Finbar_Saunders]

Reviewed:


A really NICE story this one.
Not that twee, simpering little word: "nice," this one refers to a good, rollicking, earthy tale that takes one to places one's not visited before.
There's enough odd little twists that the storyline is never predictable and that is a good thing. There's a good tension throughout and the focus shifts nimbly between characters.

I read the whole tale in one go -- not sure if it was ever issued as a serial but it doesn't need any week-long cliff-hanger to keep up the interest. The pace is excellent and the romance leaves one feeling good at the way things sort themselves out.

Give it a go!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
 

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