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Reviews by Jim S
About Jim S:
I'm American, retired and love to read. I've had a love affair with books, more recently digital media, ever since high school.

Storiesonline asks reviewers to grade along the lines of plot, story quality and appeal to the reviewer. This is really a good framework on which to judge any writing. I like stories that have a flow to them from beginning to end, meaning one wrapped around a theme. From there, good English is a must. This means good diction, grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Obvious misspellings or homonymic errors are big no-nos. And "their" instead of "they're"? C'mon. That was taught in high school (if not sooner), right?

I'm mainly here for the erotic stories. I think the stroke stories should be held to the same standards as the less erotic/non erotic ones. Does if have a plot? Is it well written? Does it affect me strongly? When all three are present, you have a good story. Which this reviewer will attempt to impart to the reader. That said, this site offers a wide variety of stories and I'm constantly surprised at the high quality of the writing in many of them.
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
The Last Ride Todd_d172 8 10 9
Collateral Damage Book I: The Vengeance DeeBee 8 8 9
The Walters Brothers qhml1 8 7 8
The Arrangment storyace 8 10 8
The Gunny and Lenore black_coffee 9 9 9
Matilda and the Assassin Switch Blayde 9 9 8
The Cabin Pope Perv 8 9 8
Lady in Red: Book 3 (The Rise of the Empire) Harddaysknight 8 9 7
Backscatter hammingbyrd7 9 10 9
A Day in a Life Robin 9 10 9
Faithful in Her Fashion RichardGerald 9 9 8
Empty Nest Lazlo Zalezac 8 6 8
Hell Followed With Him Michael Erickston 9 6 7
Ugly American cpete N/A N/A N/A
The Christmas Dream Lostlady 10 10 8
Always a Marine Ernest Bywater 9 10 9
Going Straight to Hell Levi Charon 8 10 9
Castaway Colin Barrett 8 10 9
A Slow Dance RichardGerald 9 10 9
Condoms and Pantyhose qhml1 9 6 10
Change of Life Ann Douglas 9 10 9
The Caveman Colin Barrett 8 9 10
A Shitty Way to End a Marriage qhml1 9 10 8
Whipple Island GMbusman 7 9 6
Fighting for Family Lazlo Zalezac 10 10 10
Carla Goes Cougar Lostlady 9 10 10
Yakima Coaster2 9 8 4
Suck It Up Lyndon Brown 9 10 5
Any Soldier Lubrican 10 10 10
Lifeline Jay Cantrell 10 9 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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