A lonely middle aged white man meets a sexy young black mother and her boy. She needs a place to live and a man to love; the sex is fantastic, but is that enough? A short, sexy, emotionally charged story.
Size: 75 KB (15,083 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Light Bond, Interracial, Black Female, White Male
Review by Jim S [other reviews by Jim S]
Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )
This story has a lot going for it. It puts together an older white man and black woman and child. How they get together is a little unrealistic, but how the man and woman relate really makes the story. But it also hurts it in that it focuses almost entirely on the vulnerabilities and insecurities of the man without exploring those of the woman, making it somewhat unbalanced. However, since the author hints at a possible sequel, maybe this problem will be solved.
Technically, the writing is good. None of my usual squicks, i.e. misspellings, poor grammar, homonymic/homophonic errors, etc, are present. In my opinion, it's current rating of around 6.65 is about 1.5 too low. And here's hoping for the hinted at sequel.
