This is a previously unpublished version of this story. Some changes were made prior to posting on the EMCA. I haven't had time to finish the story from that (close) perspective, so I'm throwing what I did write up here... Jane, plain Jane, runs into problems when she tries to improve her love life...
Nathan is slowly losing his grip on reality; his world degenerates around him into a series of depraved findings, nightmares, and a figure who seems to follow him everywhere.
After the Feds started taking down the families and the godfathers were being sent to prison for the rest of their lives we sat down and analyzed our business. We decided that the gambling, prostitution, loan sharking and labor unions were making us way too visible. We needed to divest ourselves of those enterprises and become more invisible to the Feds. It was my idea to start Revenge, Inc.
In a ceremony at the Church of the Obedient Naked Male, Bill whacks off and sucks Angela's cunt before the assembled gathering and promises to be her faithful slave.