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Reviews by Derek Smith
About Derek Smith:
I am a semi-retired technical author, an avid reader and fluent in both English and American (as well as French and German)!

Business took me all over the northern hemisphere, flying gave me plenty of time to read. I wish e-books had been available at the time.

Poor spelling, grammatical errors and incorrect punctuation irritate me. If you expect people to read and enjoy your stories please have the courtesy to proof read them or have them edited by someone competent.

I enjoy stories with a well crafted plot, developed characters and which show some imagination. How my enormous tab A fitted into slot B, thirteen times in three hours is not, in my opinion, part of a good story! Stories with feelings, compassion and care for the characters within will score high when judged by my standards.
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Sacrifice and Reward: Paha Sapa Saga Book One Robin Deeter 9 9 9
Living Two Lives - Book 1 Gruinard 9 8 9
Lightning in a Bottle Phil Brown 9 9 9
Apprentice Smith - the Rewrite Telephoneman 9 8 9
Woolly Wilds 2 starfiend 9 9 9
The Pub Telephoneman 9 8 9
Earning His Wings Ann Douglas 9 9 9
Chasing the Last Road to Stockholm SleeperyJim 9 9 9
Firebrand Snekguy 9 9 9
At Your Service, Ma'Am! The Heartbreak Kid 9 9 9
The Big Short D.T. Iverson 9 8 9
The Farmer's Daughter lichtyd 9 9 9
Queen of Jarilo Snekguy 9 9 9
A Handful of Darkness The Heartbreak Kid 9 9 9
Duel and Duality; Book 1 of Poacher's Progress Jack Green 9 9 9
Delilah Tedbiker 9 9 9
Runaway Train Jay Cantrell 9 9 9
Mothers and Daughters Lazlo Zalezac 9 9 9
Was I Man Enough Andyhm 9 9 9
A Man of Regular Habits Tedbiker 9 9 9
Gary Cooper MysteryWriter 7 7 7
Wild Geese Tedbiker 9 8 9
Overboard Too! Friar Tuck 9 9 9
The Dildo That Erased Claire Bonneville's Memory Lubrican 9 9 9
Seekers Tedbiker 9 9 9
Petgirl Tedbiker 8 9 8
Melissa Tedbiker 9 9 9
A Much of a Which of a Wind Colin Barrett 9 8 9
Companion MisguidedChild 9 8 9
Deja Vu Ascendancy AscendingAuthor 8 8 8
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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