A second posting after a complete rewrite, follows Powell on his journey to create a forge of his own. This is a new genre for me and one I'm unlikely to repeat. There will be no sequel.
Size: 150 KB (29,074 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft
Review by Derek Smith [other reviews by Derek Smith]
Reviewed:
Thank yo Mr. Telephone man for revising this excellent story and thank you also for going back on your word and writing some more in this genre.
This is a good story with a well planned plot, interesting characters, generally well written, perfectly paced and above all, entertaining.
That is why most of us read, isn't it? We want to be entertained, transported out of our everyday lives to somewhere where we can bask in new experiences.
That is what this story does. I am not going to review the 'not quite sequels' but they fit perfectly, are a real bonus because we were told that there would not be any and we can just hope that they keep turning up so we can add them to the reading list.
Thank you Mr. T. You are appreciated. As the English teacher said, "Keep up the good work."
