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Reviews by Ivan_Ronical
About Ivan_Ronical:
Hi, I'm an asshole who reviews stories.

I like long walks on the beach and collecting small wooden elephants. Also character development and laughing at cliches.

Things I dislike are plentiful, including glasses and crabs. More relevant to anyone reading this page, I would not consider myself an enthusiast of poor word or grammar use; it takes physical restraint to stop me from posting a bad review when authors mix up character names, and I take it to the next level when reviewing stories which have little or no plot. Above all, I am confident that there is a special place in hell reserved for authors who start a great story and don't finish it.

If you'd like me to review something you've written, feel free to send me a mail.
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Young Blood icehead 7 7 8
Only Three Months Old Softy 9 10 9
The Unexpected Visitor Martin Young 9 7 9
Laramie Dilettante 8 9 9
Loving My Bunny Girl Allan Joyal 9 N/A 9
Magic Lazlo Zalezac 8 10 10
Magician's Merger Xenophon Hendrix 10 10 10
A Midsummer Knight's Dream Lazarus Valentine 10 10 10
The Omega Touch Lazarus Valentine 10 10 10
Intermitent Predator Special D. 9 6 9
Taking Olivia Mr Hyde 9 N/A 8
Bosom Buddies Bosom Buddies 9 8 9
Neuro Submission Transmitter SamSlam 9 9 9
The No Strings Challenge lametoad 9 9 10
Genie Chronicles Joe Brolly 9 9 9
The Perfect Visitor Lubrican 9 10 9
Beating Off Bob's Guide to Writing Really Bad Erotica Beating Off Bob N/A 10 10
Sweet Dreams Are Made of These Innuendo 9 8 8
Life With Alpha Any Pseudonym 9 8 10
Daze in the Valley Jay Cantrell 10 9 9
The Wager Unca D 8 9 7
The Book of David bluedragon 10 10 9
The Collar Around the Heart Old Softy 10 8 10
Conflicted Eldridge 8 9 9
Allison and the Primdales Daddycums 6 9 7
Finding a Place Don Lockwood 10 10 10
Heroes Don Lockwood 10 9 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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