A nerd gets more than he bargained for when he becomes best friends with the five hottest girls in school
Size: 533 KB (98,323 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Lesbian, Heterosexual, True Story, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Food, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, Big Breasts, Public Sex, Slow, School
Review by funkso [other reviews by funkso]
Reviewed:
Ian's a bit of a nerd. He wears his comic book t-shirts, and hangs out with his AV Club friends, and does well at school and not so well with the ladies. In a moment of courage he asks Corrine, one of the hottest girls in school, to be a part of his club's movie - as the damsel in distress.
He soon finds he gets along great with Corrine, and her friends - 5 of the hottest, and well stacked, women at his school.
They're from different backgrounds, with different interests, but as a group they get along great - and Ian starts to find his emotions and hormones leading him to interests with each of them.
But none of them are interested in him, especially not for a relationship, so he is confused and tormented. Then they decide to start changing him into a more attractive man, and he becomes a closer friend, and eventually... well, you just have to read the story!
One of the hottest, and well written stories I've read for a while, this chronicles Ian's final year of school before he goes off to college, and how he learns to be friends with some beautiful women and helps them grow as well.
I hugely enjoyed it and it's sexy, and fun, tender and melancholy - with regrets and sadness, and growth and joy.
Everything you'd want in a coming of age story. Read it.
Review by Ivan_Ronical [other reviews by Ivan_Ronical]
Reviewed:
I had thought this story was dead since it went a couple months without updates, but then WOOSH! new chapters arrived, and I set to reading them as fast as I could scroll.
I think the main draw here for me is the difference between the characters. They're all described very well, and they're pretty likeable for the most part, but the girls don't run into each others' characters and it's lots of fun reading about them - especially the sex scenes, which are also very different from character to character and scene to scene.
The length and scenario thus far puts me in mind to consider the first OSL (bluedragon) story, though all the girls are still alive and nobody's been date raped yet (bluedragon fans will get this). That said, the sex is amazingly well done, and I keep craving more of it, which is tough, especially in a story that's mostly about sex. I'm really looking forward to the developments that the author has dropped some breadcrumbs about.
On a technical level, well, there's some potholes. Not big ones, and they didn't make me throw my keyboard as I am wont to do when I come across especially egregious errors.
Given that this is the author's (pen name's) first story, I'm very excited to see more, both for this story and (hopefully) others.
Review by BlackIrish [other reviews by BlackIrish]
Reviewed:
First off, it's a stroke AND it's not done.
Horny high school boys/girls doing what (mostly) comes naturally. They are likeable and there are no cringe moments thus far. So, it's not just a stroke by any means but, at the end of the day, it's a stroke. Which is good, right?
There's a plot and there's some fine, well-developed characters and it's going to have multiple... books so there's anticipation.
Puns aside, the story is well written and technically very good. The author's in no hurry so the 'chapter a week or thumbs down' club should give it a rest.
This reviewer likes it very much and will wait, patiently, for more.
