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Author's Description:
A normal boy has a very dark secret. He a lycanthrope. He soon discovers that there are more out there than he was originally led to believe. Watch him start to grow up and learn to deal with the differrences.
Size: 312 KB (62,721 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Consensual, NonConsensual, Magic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Horror, Paranormal, Were animal, MaleDom, Rough, Harem, First, Size, Violent, Transformation

Review by Ivan_Ronical   [other reviews by Ivan_Ronical]

Reviewed:


Ah, another unfinished story which I stepped into without realizing that it seems likely to remain unfinished (though I hope it does not).

This is all around a neat story. The main character, who is depicted initially as a painfully shy loner, is afflicted with lycanthropy (he turns into a werewolf) in a world where apparently other people also have the same affliction without it being public knowledge. Throughout the story, we get to see him continually growing ever-so-slightly more social, whether by his own decision or that of others.

I realize that the story is up to chapter six, but it goes by very quickly. As a result, I found it to be quite a shock when I got to the end and there was nothing more to read, because the story is definitely interesting.

Sex: there's not a lot of it by any means, and it's not the focus of the story. Scenes with it do exist, however.

The biggest downfall of this story, aside from not being longer or finished, is that I'm almost positive the author has no editor helping to improve readability (as evidenced by the fact that the title is misspelled). This jumps out all over, and I can only hope that the author finds someone to help out with proofreading, because the story is really solid.

I'm hopeful as I write reviews for these unfinished stories that I will somehow inspire the author to start writing again. This is definitely such a case, and I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story. You should be too, so get reading and send the author some feedback to get more chapters out here!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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