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A stunningly beautiful and sexually liberated woman marries into a wealthy yet strictly conservative family. The result? A stepmother who's wicked in all the right ways!
Size: 3367 KB (633,163 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Romantic, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Incest, Brother, Sister, Father, Daughter, DomSub, Light Bond, Orgy, Polygamy/Polyamory, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Sex Toys, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, Slow

Review by Ivan_Ronical   [other reviews by Ivan_Ronical]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


This is basically the incest story epic of the site, and I'm surprised there isn't a review for it already given the automatic rating/reader boost that the incest tag generates.

I'll preface this review by stating that I read it 6+ months ago, so the details are not as sharp as they could be.

Unlike the description implies, this story is not described from the POV of the "stepmother". There are some cutaways here and there to show more sex scenes happening off screen, so to speak, but the main character is a teenage boy, and the story covers several years of the entire family's life.

At the beginning, we get an overall description of the Primdale family: they're wealthy, attractive, but a little sad because the mother was off somewhere being a moron and now she's out of the picture. Allison arrives soon enough, an early twenty-something supermodel-level babe who has decided to swap her dead career for a life as a trophy wife. One of my favorite parts of the story, character-wise, is that she is aggressive and confident enough that she actually states it like this without trying to hide it at all.

I think throughout the course of this story, there's only two people mentioned who aren't in any sex scenes at all. The scenes are everywhere, in every combination, and I don't think there's many fetishes which aren't covered at some point; suffice to say, the story would NOT stand without them. If you're looking for stroke, this has it by the ton, and it's all pretty hot and well done.

I will say that there were a few scenes/couplings that I would have preferred be left out. Likely this is just my own opinion and will not be widely shared, but I'm mentioning it in the case that some reader will agree and wonder whether s/he is alone.

Technically...I don't remember any glaring issues. I'll give it a 9 because I also don't recall it being perfect, and I make mental notes of those stories.

Overall, this was a fun (but long) story with some memorable characters. Almost every plot point revolves around sex in some way, so don't bother reading if you aren't in the mood for that.

Plot: 6 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
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