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Reviews by Teloz
About Teloz:
An Englishman and proud of it, I've been an avid reader since I first learned to read. I've written much and published little, mainly because I'm my own worst critic, though I did edit a parish magazine for four and a half years, writing regular articles, and editorials.

I rarely recap the story in my reviews, the reader should have read the blurb first, so no point reiterating it, and anyway, the author should have composed the blurb to hook the reader in the first place. In a review, what I feel about the story is what's important.

I try never to let cultural differences affect my review, I know some people can't help it if they can't spell 'colour', or they call a 'lift' an 'elevator'. Luckily, I speak, and read, fluent American!

Just as an aside, talking about the authors blurb, one of the best ways to turn me off a story is to put up a blurb riddled with misspellings, lack of capitalisation, or poor grammar. If you want to sell your story to a reader, the blurb needs as much attention as the whole thing. Just remember APPPP! (A proper précis pulls the punter!)
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Bravo Force Robin Pentecost 10 9 10
The Mystery of Magic Gina Marie Wylie 10 9 10
Rebecca Danced EzzyB 10 9 10
A New Home for the Holidays Nuke Danger, 3rd Aye 10 9 10
Steward of the Wood Les Lumens 10 9 10
Mr. E double_entendre 9 5 8
Cattail Wes Boyd 10 9 10
Going Fishing lordshipmayhem 10 9 10
The Door Next Door Unca D 10 9 10
Corona Heights Shrink42 10 7 10
Trio Paladin 10 9 10
Love Solid as an Oak JasonD 9 4 8
Perchance to Dream FantasyLover 10 9 10
Pink Hair Tedbiker 10 9 10
Once Upon a Fantasy Coaster2 9 8 10
The Glow of Motherhood Cor 10 9 10
Delayed Reaction Coaster2 10 9 10
How Are You? vulcez 10 9 10
Biggest and Best Flavian 10 9 10
Ginny Clansman 9 4 9
Adopted Family Howard Faxon 10 9 10
The Accidental Master Lord Skies 10 9 10
Klutz MisguidedChild 10 7 10
Finding Shelter Jay Cantrell 9 6 10
Redemption Shrink42 10 7 10
Beauty and the Beast Matt Moreau 10 8 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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