Author's Description:
Everyone knew that the city of Corona Heights excelled in almost every way that could be measured. Everyone had also heard untold rumors about what people had to do to be residents there. The rumors could not be true, could they? Such a place could not really exist, could it?
Size: 1343 KB (251,564 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Cheating, Incest, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism
Everyone knew that the city of Corona Heights excelled in almost every way that could be measured. Everyone had also heard untold rumors about what people had to do to be residents there. The rumors could not be true, could they? Such a place could not really exist, could it?
Size: 1343 KB (251,564 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Cheating, Incest, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism
Review by Teloz [other reviews by Teloz]
Reviewed:
Shrink42 always tells a good story and this is another one. The plot is good, and the characters believable, though by no means infallible, which all adds savour to the story.
Where Shrink42 falls down, is in the technical aspects of his writing. He has a good command of the language, and a broad vocabulary, but there are so many homophones, and heterographs, it gets a little wearing. Nearly all of these would be eliminated by decent editing, or even a proper read through.
If you can abide the errors, this particular story is great. Erotic rather than pornographic, it will keep you entranced. I just wish there was a place called Corona Heights, and I just wish I was Jack!
Read, and enjoy!
Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
