Omachuck: Blog

Chapter 5 posts in the morning. In it, we learn some more of the Harrad Colony's early history.

We are also introduced to a different Confederacy species, the P'Ukerrchp, that bears a strong physical resemblance to an orange and green striped Earthat sloth, with manipulative digits instead of claws.

The P'Ukerrchp are trading partners with the Tuull and once put one over on them. The Tuull want payback...

In this chapter we learn a little about Caleb's human companions, his visit to Tullat where he and his companions get a Tuull name, and Lisa Marie gets a Tuull title.

Look for it Saturday morning...

Chapter three will magically appear Wednesday morning.

We learn something of Caleb's early childhood and the companions who will grow up with him and protect him.

Chapter two posts in the morning (Sunday).

I had no idea that Inkie is so well liked. In this chapter she visits Atlantisat to drop off some newly aquired Tuull technology and to enlist the help of one Marcie Haywood and her sisters in designing and constructing a ship for Caleb.

lordshipmayhem's Trials and Tribunations & Going Fishing - both excellent tails - tell Marcie's story and the importance of the technology she develops.

Finally!

Caleb and Cheval Jaune will begin tomorrow. Another story in Thinking Horndog's Swarm Cycle, Caleb continues the story of the experimental Harrad Colony and the colonists' relationship with the Tuull.

In this story we learn about a new weapon to fight the Sa'arm and a way humans can influence their relationship with the Confederacy AIs if and when the Sa'arm are contained.

I'm experimenting with fewer and longer chapters. Your comments and voting (vote what you think - just vote) will help me decide if this will work for me. I'm not looking to boost my scores, rather I need your input to improve my writing.

The story is complete. I'll post a new chapter every three days.