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My thanks to everyone who reported the messed up last posting. I have submitted a correction. The correct order should be chapter 12, Epilogue, Character list.

I have made corrections to all the other typos etc, that you folks so kindly noted - so once the chapter order is fixed, the story should be clean for all you folks who download for their e-readers. Check the the character list, and if it is not centered, it's okay.

Chapter 12 and the Epilogue load tomorrow morning, and this adventure concludes.

So, yes, a successful mutiny can be carried out on a Confederacy ship, even with an AI aboard. AIs aren't perfect, after all.

As I write this, Mutiny has the highest score of any of my stories. Looks like you folks enjoyed it as much as I did. Please vote, if you haven't yet.

On the the next...

Chapter Nine: Fishin' In Neverland queued up for tomorrow morning.

Vivie wants to extract children, so she goes hunting for strays. Vivie 7 Pimps 0.

One of the reasons I don't immediately post an entire story, even though it is ostensibly finished: Readers make suggestions that enhance what I've written.

For example, a comment today cause me to modify a paragraph in chapter 7. I added two sentences that, to me at least, better explained Tuull bravery. They aren't pacifist as we think of pacifism, they simply aren't capable of violence against sapient beings. Kipling's Gunga Din praises the Tuull type of bravery.

So the paragraph now reads:

She looked Vivie in the eye and told her, "And you, my dear, will be the first and likely the only being to set foot on the planet Tuull that has deliberately killed another sapient being. You are going to pick a song and explain it to them and help them understand why humans believe killing might be necessary. Maybe you can contrast Saddler with Ochs and show refusal to kill can also be considered heroic by humans. Then, and I think you should be the one to recite it; we'll end with Kipling's Gunga Din. An explanation may not even be needed. It speaks to the heart of Tuull-type bravery."

There has been enough interest in the cookies to post the recipe here. Enjoy!

Cherry-Chocolate Chip Cookies

Yields about 4 dozen

1 1/4 c flour

1/4 ts salt

1/2 ts baking soda

1 st butter

1/4 c dark brown sugar (firmly packed)

1/2 c granulated sugar

6 oz semi-sweet chocolate pieces

1 ea egg

4 oz jar maraschino cherries

1/4 c chopped walnuts

Sift together flour, salt, and baking soda.

In another bowl, cream butter with white and brown sugars, then beat in eggs. Drain and chop cherries. Add cherries, nuts, chocolate pieces, and other dry ingredients into butter-sugar mixture.

Drop rounded tsp of batter on ungreased cookie sheets about 1 inch apart.

Bake at 350 for 8-10 minutes. Yields about 4 dozen

They keep well when frozen in a container. Taste very good frozen too.