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I just edited chapter 9 to add the sixth stanza. Your feedback indicated a strong preference that I do so.
Thanks
A reader pointed out to me that The Battle Hymn has a sixth verse. I was unaware.
I leave to you, my readers whether I edit the story and add the sixth verse which is usually not published. It is:
He is coming like the glory of the morning on the wave,
He is Wisdom to the mighty, He is Succour to the brave,
So the world shall be His footstool, and the soul of Time His slave,
Our God is marching on.
I'll make my decision tomorrow.
I've decided to queue Chapter nine to upload tomorrow (Saturday) morning. I've enjoyed your responses, and frankly, am looking forward to your reactions to the story's finish. Please let me know what you think.
I've fixed the typos you've identified. Not many at all because of my cadre of helpers. So any of you who download into readers, the story is as error free as I can make it.
Chapter 7 is in the queue to post Monday morning.
We learn about the development of Caleb's companions and the discovery of Pern's first indigenous animal to become a pet.
Chapter six is a short chapter in which we see Dora at work matchmaking. Look for it to post tomorrow (Friday) Morning.
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