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Chapter six posted this morning. We now hear the story of the stranded passengers and their flight to safety.

I've queued up several corrections of typos. You'd think with all the eyes upon the story there wouldn't be any, but you folks spotted and reported some, and they are now fixed. There's no change to the story.

In addition to my proofreading commitments, I'm reading my two DiD stories so I can be consistent with the one that is churning around in my head. If I can come up with an acceptable segment and Old Man With a Pen's approval, I want Monica Mechanic and Pēteris to meet Surprise Melody Flintkote. Don't hold your breath, you're pretty much aware how long it takes for one of my stories to emerge...

Chapter 5 is in the queue to post tomorrow morning.

Virgil and his crew move to their home away from home in the university dorm. He is presented with a strong 'request' to relieve the ladies' itches. Will his wives approve?

Then the contingent of quarantined refuges arrive from San Diego. Then...

Thanks for your comments and your votes. I also noticed that there is a sizeable number of you reading my previous virus stories. Feedback on them is welcome as I'm mulling over a possible 3rd story in that series...

As ever, enjoy.

Chapter 4 is in the queue and will post Thursday morning.

Virgil's plane is diverted to Paducah, Kentucky. A new virus is suspected, and all aboard are quarantined. Virgil realizes that he has two wives... He's not certain if he's in Heaven or on the way to Hell.

People die.

Chapter 3 is queued and scheduled for posting in the morning.

Chastity gets her day in court, and Virgil acquires a wife and another daughter. We learn some of the advice the Army brat consultants gave Chastity.

Thanks for your questions and feedback.

Chapter 2 is in the queue for tomorrow morning.

We watch Chastity and Virgil begin a relationship. We find out that Lawyer Sam is a good guy. Chastity refuses to sleep alone and has no body shyness.

Questions:

1) Virgil Caen is a take off of the name of the 'narrator' in the song The Night They Drove Old Dixie Down sung by The Band and Joan Baez among others. His middle name came from the name of the train. No agenda, just been playing with that for a while.

2) A Herc is a Hercules C-130 and the 'Herky Hilton' is slang for hanging a hammock in the aft, often near the ramp and frequently blocking access to the toilet. The bunk(s) in the cockpit are considered uncomfortable by many and are often filled with gear or just plain junk.

Much thanks for the feedback, questions, and the voting.