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First another heads up:

We are several days away from the posting of Chapter Seven. One of my editors advised me that unless one has read my story THE Harem Tales 5: Inkie, it may be hard to follow the characters as they are introduced. I'm going to look and see what I can do to resolve this, but I thought letting you know could help. As Inkie is one of my highest rated stories, and is pretty short, I doubt this will be a real hardship.

In Chapter Six, we return to Vivie as an adult aboard the Bunte Kuh.

in Chapter Seven, Vivie meets Inkie and Helva who are sent to investigate the allegations of mutiny. I'm not going to even hint at a spoiler...

Chapter 3 is in the queue for the morning upload. Vivie becomes Cadet Vivie and Gunny Sam is given to her as a Chinese Obligation.

Spoiler Alert!

As promised, I've appended an alphabetized character list for the entire story. Naturally, this will include some spoilers, so proceed with care.

*Armand* - Inkie's adopted son

*Boats, Vivie, Boatswain Genevieve Arthur* - More mature version of Vivie, Accidentally extracted as 11-year-old, precocious

*Bossie* - Bunte Kuh's AI, later renamed Bessie

*Bunte Kuh* - Experimental, purpose-built supply/passenger carrier

*Captain Darius Delaney Dreck* - Tweedledee or Dreck, Bunte Kuh's first captain

*Captain Pierce Masters* - Bunte Kuh's second captain

*Captain Young* - Captain of the colony ship Indian Princess

*Clarence Darrow* - AI 'lawyer' budded from Bossy to defend Vivie

*Corporal Stuart* - Killed during a pickup, 1st to will his concubines to Vivie

*Dangerous Ones* - Sa'arm means 'dangerous ones' in the Confederacy's trading language

*Department-that-doesn't-exist* - Top Secret Confederacy department charged with raining chaos onto Earth First

*Dinky* - Inkie's adopted daughter

*Dora* - Harrad Colony's AI, awake, co-spouse in THE Harem

*Harold Seldom aka Pat* - Mister 'Sees Patterns' - The man who sees patterns. Most women cannot see him,

*Rukb-at System* - Harrad Colony's system

*Inkie, Inez Nadenka Key, Tuull name S'Rndult T'Blssut* - in English, 'Principal Master of the Arts, Harmony' - Teen pop star, awarded citizenship by the Tuull

*Jackass Company* - Unit formed of Earth Firsters to be frontline cannon fodder against the Sa'arm

*Jennifer* - Vivie's dependent, Leah's daughter, later Vivie's concubine

*Jonnie Darling* - 'Lost child', Wendy's sister, adopted by Wendy

*June* - Mom, Tweedledee's concubine, later Vivie's

*Ki and Ko* - Ninja Twins, Co-sponsors of Sam Matthews, Office of Targeted Extractions

*Leah* - Vivie's first concubine, Jennifer's mother

*Lieutenant Madeleine Rawls* - Cadet Vivie's first commanding officer

*Lin* - Lin-Manuel Miranda the creator of the musicals In the Heights and Hamilton

*Llew and Siân Carter* - Department-that-doesn't-exist, siblings, Co-sponsors

*Martha Grayson* - Governor of Azahar Colony

*Mei-Lin Chin* - Marine Private on Indian Princess, involved with Vivie's extraction

*Melody Johns, Staff Sergeant* - Paired with Gunny, later Vivie

*Michael Darling* - 'Lost child', Wendy's brother, adopted by Wendy

*Nana Darling* - The Darling kids' cat

*Nate Forrest* - 'Grandpa', Vivie's 1st Grade teacher & mentor

*Pat* - 'Mr. Sees Patterns', Harold Seldom, Most women cannot see him

*Petra and Lucas* - Vivie's orphan twin dependents

*Prissy* - AI on Vivie's pickup ship, Indian Princess

*Red (medical) bitch patch* - One of several first aid kits. This one for trauma

*Rudy* - Vivie's inherited concubine

*Gunny, Sam Anderson, Gunnery Sergeant* - Vivie's mentor, paired with Melody Johns, later Vivie

*Sam Matthews* - Papa Sam, Heads the Office of Targeted Extractions

*Samantha, Sam* - Underaged CS Officer on Thule

*Summer* - Pregnant 'Lost child', Indian girl living in Neverland, rape victim, adopted by Wendy

*Sylvia* - Original leader of Neverland lost kids

*T'Blssut* - Tuull name given Inkie. In English - 'Harmony.'

*T'Bwinkel* of the clan N'Trast, Rockie - Lead Counselor of the Tuull Planetary Council

*T'Kleeoran* - Dora, Harrad Colony's AI, awake, co-spouse in THE Harem

T'Kleesual* - Jubal, Tuull AI, plenipotentiary ambassador from the Tuull.

T'Krandit* - K'treel explorer AGX026, Helva, Inkie's ship and wakened AI. Inkie is her Brawn

*Vivie* - Boatswain Genevieve Arthur, Boats, Accidentally extracted as 11-year-old, precocious

*Wendy Darling* - 'Lost child', adopted by Wendy

I changed my mind. Through the USA's long Independence Day weekend, a new chapter will post each day, then move to a chapter every other day schedule. Look for chapter 2 early tomorrow (Friday) morning.

In Chapter 2, you learn a little of Boats's background and extraction.

Thanks to all for the feedback.

Where I'm sitting, it is about fifteen minutes until the USA's Independence Day, celebrating the Continental Congress's vote to approve our Declaration of Independence from the British Empire.

Happy Birthday USA!

I'm finally satisfied with Mutiny On The Bunte Kuh and will place chapter one in the Queue as soon as this blog entry posts. The story is finished at twelve chapters long, and will post every other day until complete.

I'm going to brag a little on this one, because I can. So here is what one of my editors sent me along with his edits and proofs:

WOW! ADVENTURE, SUSPENSE, ROMANCE, TRIUMPHING OVER BAD GUYS, JUSTICE, FAMILIES, DREAMS, DETERMINATION, AND GIRL SCOUT COOKIES !
ALMOST 31,000 WORDS OF FINE ENTERTAINMENT. Thank you Omachuck!

(32,429 - I added a few more.) So, read, enjoy, and let me know whether you agree.

In addition to a character list at the end of the story, I'll post one in my blog after a few chapters.

As with almost all my stories, there are characters and situations from earlier stories, and this is no exception. The authors in the Swarm Cycle have been very generous with their loan of characters, situations, and advice. We all owe them thanks.

And thank you my editors!

Almost exactly two years ago, I started writing this story. It isn't all that long, but I kept getting distracted.

I just sent it to my editors and hope to have it up and going before too long.

The question - With an AI monitoring everything on a Confederacy ship, can there really be a mutiny? If so, what happens next?