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Tomorrow the next pair of chapters will post. Jason 'gets to know' the Safis much better. Marcie acquires two satellites.
After these two chapters, we'll leave Jason and find out who is this guy Bob White. Stick with me; this is why my editors recommended two stories instead of one.
I didn't realize how short some chapters were and are coming. Stalling wasn't my intention, so I just revised the upload queue so that any chapter(s) shorter than 20k will be loaded with another.
My thanks to you who have sent me error reports. I think all that were reported for Bob White are now fixed. It certainly validates my spacing the uploads so I can fix what you folks find and report.
You seem to be liking the story. In addition, the downloads for my other stories have increased from about 500 a week to about 5,000 a week since Bob White began. You really make me feel good and rewarded. My next story, also in the Swarm Cycle, is nearing completion of the initial draft. Look for Mutiny on the Bunte Kuh about the time Bob White completes...
I hope I'm better at that prediction than I was For Bob...
My thanks to you all for reading and responding. Even with all the proofing, many of you have noted errors. I will fix them as well as those newly surfaced for other stories.
I'm in Scotland touring, with limited Internet, so It will take a while to respond and fix.
Please keep those notes coming...
Chapter 4 should post shortly. As the title says, the family is learning - especially does and don'ts.
Sex happens.
My thanks to those of you who have reported typos.
Chapter 3 is in the queue for tomorrow.
Jason and his ladies begin the process of family building. Neli and Calypso are upset.Things are not as they expected...
Comments and suggestions have been helpful, and we're only two chapters into the story.
Yes indeed, some of you are going back and reading the Harem Tales - #4 would be most helpful, and Woody.
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