Omachuck: Blog

Two more chapters are in the queue to post tomorrow. It seems to be that y'all like the Bob White section better than the Jason section.

The adults plot in chapter 15. See some results in Chapter 16. Will the covey grow? What do you think?

Yes, I know there are a lot of Y'alls. Maybe a few too many. And, in my part of the South, y'all can be singular and plural. How about y'all tell be about yours...

Two more chapters are in the queue to upload tomorrow.

Brother and sister get a sitter. Then they get crosswise with the assistant principal. They go to court. Hmmm?

You folks seem to like the story.

Tomorrow the next pair of chapters will post. Jason 'gets to know' the Safis much better. Marcie acquires two satellites.

After these two chapters, we'll leave Jason and find out who is this guy Bob White. Stick with me; this is why my editors recommended two stories instead of one.

I didn't realize how short some chapters were and are coming. Stalling wasn't my intention, so I just revised the upload queue so that any chapter(s) shorter than 20k will be loaded with another.

My thanks to you who have sent me error reports. I think all that were reported for Bob White are now fixed. It certainly validates my spacing the uploads so I can fix what you folks find and report.

You seem to be liking the story. In addition, the downloads for my other stories have increased from about 500 a week to about 5,000 a week since Bob White began. You really make me feel good and rewarded. My next story, also in the Swarm Cycle, is nearing completion of the initial draft. Look for Mutiny on the Bunte Kuh about the time Bob White completes...

I hope I'm better at that prediction than I was For Bob...

My thanks to you all for reading and responding. Even with all the proofing, many of you have noted errors. I will fix them as well as those newly surfaced for other stories.

I'm in Scotland touring, with limited Internet, so It will take a while to respond and fix.

Please keep those notes coming...