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Reviews by Teloz
About Teloz:
An Englishman and proud of it, I've been an avid reader since I first learned to read. I've written much and published little, mainly because I'm my own worst critic, though I did edit a parish magazine for four and a half years, writing regular articles, and editorials.

I rarely recap the story in my reviews, the reader should have read the blurb first, so no point reiterating it, and anyway, the author should have composed the blurb to hook the reader in the first place. In a review, what I feel about the story is what's important.

I try never to let cultural differences affect my review, I know some people can't help it if they can't spell 'colour', or they call a 'lift' an 'elevator'. Luckily, I speak, and read, fluent American!

Just as an aside, talking about the authors blurb, one of the best ways to turn me off a story is to put up a blurb riddled with misspellings, lack of capitalisation, or poor grammar. If you want to sell your story to a reader, the blurb needs as much attention as the whole thing. Just remember APPPP! (A proper précis pulls the punter!)
Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Tales From Mist World Anotherp08 2017-11-19 9 2 8
The Girl Beneath the Skin blacknight99 2014-09-27 10 9 10
The Winsome Widow Belinda LaPage 2014-09-21 10 9 10
Once Upon an Alien MisguidedChild 2014-09-15 10 9 10
Things That Go Hump in the Night Levi Charon 2014-09-14 10 9 10
Mina's Children Windy Sales 2014-07-30 10 9 10
Cracked Foundations PennLady 2014-04-26 9 9 10
Gamer Goddess Tx Tall Tales 2014-04-05 10 9 10
Next Sunday Parthenogenesis 2014-03-26 10 9 10
A Whore and a Thief StangStar06 2014-03-14 9 8 10
Vacation? Dual Writer 2014-02-22 9 9 10
Quinn and Kimberly Harris Matt Moreau 2014-02-16 N/A N/A N/A
The Accidental Nudist Cabin Tx Tall Tales 2014-02-16 9 9 10
The Cure Levi Charon 2014-02-16 N/A N/A N/A
The Prodigal aroslav 2014-02-15 10 9 10
A Glimpse Through the Mist of Time Texrep 2014-02-06 10 9 10
The Millionaire Next Door Lazlo Zalezac 2014-01-29 10 9 10
Pasayten Pete Graybyrd 2014-01-11 10 9 10
Wizard Tremaine Rotedrachen 2014-01-03 10 8 10
Inside Angela GordTheMonkey 2013-12-24 10 9 10
What Took You So Long? Ray1031 2013-12-23 10 9 10
Ed happyhugo 2013-12-18 10 9 10
Memoirs Of A Young Victorian Lady - Volume 1 rlfj 2013-10-27 9 9 7
Handyman Tedbiker 2013-10-19 9 9 10
Soulmates Will Bailey 2013-10-04 9 9 10
Baker's Dozen Richmond Road 2013-09-27 10 9 10
Mistrusting a Memory Lubrican 2013-09-18 10 9 10
Millie's Western Adventure Lubrican 2013-09-17 10 9 10
Daughters of Priapus 2 - Reawakenings Athalia 2013-09-16 10 9 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer