Ed by happyhugo


Description: Ed is getting over the death of his wife. He meets a woman and her girl child, both who have been abused. Within a short time period he meets another woman who is struggling to make a home for her autistic son. All four individuals soon love Ed
Size: 356 KB ( ~ 67,508 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Romantic, Heterosexual

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-12-18


happyhugo admits that this is a Cinderella story, and it is, so if you're looking for sex, it isn't here. If you're looking for a fairy tale that will keep you engrossed in the story, you're in the right place. You may, if you are of a sensitive disposition however, need a box of Kleenex handy.

The story is well written, and well edited, I only picked up on a few minor errors, and it's so gratifying to find an author that knows the difference between 'to', 'two', and 'too'! The grammar and spelling are excellent, though the way the story is written, and particularly the dialogue, seems to give a slightly pedantic, Victorian feel; this may just be a personal feeling, and even if true, it is of no detriment to the tale.

Autism is a terrible affliction, but happyhugo deals with it sensitively, and compassionately, and Ed is well worth reading.

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10