A Whore and a Thief by StangStar06

Description: She said that she did it for Us
Size: 207 KB ( ~ 39,253 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Tear Jerker, Cheating, Revenge, 2nd POV, Violent

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2014-03-14

I'm not one for cheating wife stories normally, so I thought twice before I read this one. I'm glad I did read it though, it's a good deal more subtle than the average story from that genre.

Though the revenge part was fairly predictable, there's a much more subtle twist at the end, and unlike some reviewers, I'm not going to tell you what it is, read the story! A new twist on a common plot though.

Technically the tale is pretty good, though there seemed to be quite a few lines of dialogue where the quotes weren't closed, and I had to go back and read the sentence again to pick up the gist of it. On the other hand, the text is beautifully free of all the common homophones that often blight a lot of stories on SoL.

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10