This is a previously unpublished version of this story. Some changes were made prior to posting on the EMCA. I haven't had time to finish the story from that (close) perspective, so I'm throwing what I did write up here... Jane, plain Jane, runs into problems when she tries to improve her love life...
Nathan is slowly losing his grip on reality; his world degenerates around him into a series of depraved findings, nightmares, and a figure who seems to follow him everywhere.
In a ceremony at the Church of the Obedient Naked Male, Bill whacks off and sucks Angela's cunt before the assembled gathering and promises to be her faithful slave.
Kelly is a hot number and she knows it. She loves to tease men and make women jealous. She gets her comeuppance on her wedding day, when she gets a very public spanking.