Brad is humiliated and dominated by his wife and her friends; having recently had his chauvinistic world turned round, his wife goes a step further and chooses a stud, as do her friends. Brad tastes total defeat, and many other things as he is reduced to a worthless oral slave. Middle aged housewives can be so cruel.
This is a blasphemous dark tale about a God loving man and his wife and how they are used and abused by a bully. It is not one of my happier works. There is lots of violence toward and creampie and sperm eating by the husband. The wife is repeatedly raped and impregnated during these violations of her body. This is a depressing story, fortunately it is only 6,000 words. Ok so much for the sales pitch.
After graduation, Sam grows apart from his two best friends, Rachel and Nathan. Now they're about to get married, and Rachel invites him to visit. He'd always been fascinated with Rachel, unable to deny her anything, and she means to deal with their unresolved issues.
Jerry at 14 feels so lucky to be allowed to join a secret club with guys a few years older than he. He has a chance to be in the inner circle as the club demonstrates its members' manhood.
The original version of this story drew some of the lowest scores and harshest comments I've ever received. Instead of deleting the original and writing it off, I decided to do a rewrite. If you read the first story, please read this one and let me know if it's any better, or if the whole concept just sucks rocks.