Behind Blue Eyes

Hi, welcome back to Middletown.

If you want some background about the MC, you can read “Red as love”, “Eye of the Beholder”, and “Rain”. Or you can read this story as it is, and hopefully enjoy it.

About the edited version: The original story had 35,660 words, it took me a year to write it, and I put a lot of effort into it. It has a lot of great moments. Yet, some readers chose to comment about one mistake I made. I’ve corrected the one-word mistake, and slightly changed some sentences but it’s still the same story.

Papatoad wrote in his profile: “I would rather read a good story with bad grammar than a bad story with perfect grammar.” This is what you get from me, good stories with unvoluntary mistakes. I know I’m biased, but “Behind Blue Eyes” is a great story and one of my personal favorites. If one mistake ruins your reading experience, then my stories are not for you.