Omachuck: Blog

In chapter 8, luck rather than skill helps Pēteris and his entourage respond when they are ambushed. This fight is rather bloody, so a communal bath is organized. Who is going to wash who? Wanna make a bet?


My thanks to those of you who have spotted and pointed out typos.

Chapter 7 is in the queue for tomorrow. Pēteris and his Companions are finally on the road. Turns out that six horses are somewhat more trouble than anticipated. What to do? And what to do about the extra butt cuddled into Pēteris' bedroll while Miriam is standing her turn on guard?

This is another short one, but remember you get a new chapter every day - guaranteed.

In tomorrow's chapter, the trio finally arrive on Chaos and verify the place is real.

You will find out why Pēteris says, "Remind me never again to take a knife to a sword fight!"

Miriam and Robyn discover in the aftermath of danger, that violence and killing made them exceptionally horny.

In Chapter 5 we find out if the family will have one or two Heroes. Melody is made happy, and Soo-Min tries to put a move on Pēteris.

Voting: The update of feedback so far is -

* Emails and comments are positive. Specific likes were appreciated.

* One blatant and serious typo that a gazillion proof readings didn't catch. (Thanks for catching and reporting it.)

* After chapter two the score went over 8.0 then after chapter three dropped back to 7.75. I can't tell if that was content or length - there are indications of both. Please vote and comment or email after you read Chapter 4. It will really help me.

Some of you know that I am one of Number 7's proof readers. I just got a new chapter to review. Look for him to post soon.

Chapter 4 is in the queue to appear tomorrow - Tuesday. As promised, it is a longer one. Normally, it would pop up sometime after 7 PM CST, but I'll try to goose it for earlier.

Soo-Min Hero Greeter returns, dragging a reluctant Caretaker candidate who isn't in the pool but meets Pēteris' specifications. (Yeah, I know this is different in almost every respect, but if it was always the same, where would be the fun?)

Anyway, the dragooned candidate is a Cassandra-quality beauty, über smart, a virgin, fertile, and thinks herself to be frigid.

Game on for Pēteris and his lovelies....