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Appearing Sunday - This is my favorite chapter of the story. Please give me your opinion.

Have you ever wondered how the Damsels miraculously get to Chaos? I have, right from the first.

I hope I've stirred an interest in the reason Annie became pregnant when all the stories in the DiD universe emphasize the Heroes' ability to resist impregnating their Damsels. (Well, almost all - seem to remember, maybe, one other.)

As always, my thanks to those of you who spot and report typos. Those who read after you have a cleaner story.

Pēteris returns to Beavis and finds the town in a lesser state than he hoped and expected. Then it's bath time for the travelers. Lisle and her wench are at first scandalized, then find humor in the happenings.

I'm going to send off these chapters as soon as my blog is updated.

And do read: Tales From the Shack: Nobody uploaded by Todd_d172 Friday.
I loved it.

Two more chapters are in the queue for tomorrow.

In Chapter 17, Pēteris' plans to rescue his Damsel come to fruition. We learn that his convoluted scheme has a motive beyond this current adventure.

In Chapter 18, they return to the farm and on to Beavis. Sarah and Cherry knew about Damsels, but the Damsels didn't know about Sarah and Cherry. Oops!

There were more errors reported, and I appreciate your letting me know. Thanks.

My apologies. I intended to goose today's chapters to post this morning, but I got involved with writing a new story that a character named Mishka started whispering in my ear. The new story isn't in anyone's universe, and I've yet to decide about creating one of my own. Chapters 11 & 12 should upload shortly. I'll try to do better in the morning with Chapters 13 & 14.

Sooo.

In chapter 13, Pēteris stages a fight with his two Companions, and to all appearances, takes up with Maggie. Those appearances include some very vocal orgasms in the night. Maggie is pleased.

In chapter 14, Maggie is still happy. Miriam creates Stumpy with her sword, and Robyn meets Hastert face-to-face. He takes her bait, and Pēteris' plan is well under way.

I had a most insightful email today. As a result, I'm stepping up my posting. Until we reach the last two chapters, I've set to post two chapters each day. The story will finish next Monday - April 3rd.


Why the change? Several of you expressed frustration with the extended posting, and I interpreted it as impatience - like I often feel when reading serials. Then I received this:


"I have read several of your stories now. For the first time with Peteris, I am reading it as you publish it. While your story is pretty awesome,it is broken up like a George Lucas DVD/Blu-Ray...aka tons of little chapters. That would be fine if we were watching one chapter after the next. But when you post them like you do it causes un-intentional lurches in the story."


Now you can stick with reading the daily postings, or wait until Monday (April 3rd) and read from start to finish.


I honestly don't know what this will mean long-term for future stories, but I get it. Do let me know if this helps. Maybe I can structure future chapters better so that they don't feel choppy.


This is a learning experience for me. I appreciate any feedback you give me.


Tomorrow, look for Chapter 12: More Preparations in addition to the previously announced The Farm.