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Two more chapters are in the queue to appear Friday.
Michael's family arrives on board Lolli and is introduced. Lolli and the other Tuull AIs are asked to help protect concubines and dependents aboard ship and later at Harrad Colony.
When Lolli replies that it doesn't understand human sexuality and sex play, Michael schedules a family porn movie and sex education night...
I just realized that I posted chapter 8 with the wrong title. The fix is in the queue with the correct title: We Were Sailing Along. ...
To avoid further confusion, I'm putting Chapter 9, the real Ding Dong The Bitch Is. ... into the upload queue. You should see it shortly.
In Chapter 9, Valerie is made very happy on her 14th birthday, but consistent with the correct title, Anita - not so much.
Sorry for the confusion.
Two more short ones in the queue for Sunday.
Michael lays down the rules of behavior for the voyage and after. Not very exciting, but essential because they are different from in much of Darjee influenced space.
Jonathan and Gillian recruit another spouse. To quote Gillian: "I'm going to corner her cute tushie and lick her stupid."
Apparently you folks liked the last post - the score is on the rise again...
As always, feedback is welcome - always.
Two more short chapters are on the launch pad - expect them tomorrow.
Abigail and Ayesha decide it's time to get laid.
Two new Tuull AIs appear in Earthat's Kuiper Belt and cause lower colon distress in the CNS Victory's Orbital Control.
Katie plans an extraction.
Let me thank you who have voted. I've responded individually to those who sent me email.
Because I'm retired, I can look at your votes more frequently than once or twice each day.
Why is that important? The most important reason is that I get a better idea of what you like. I don't work from an outline - my characters pretty much tell their tales. BUT the voting does tell me something about positioning, phrasing, and pace. From that I can try to make my stories more appealing. For these reasons, voting is very important to me.
Today, for example, two readers changed their votes from six to a higher score. That shows that at least some of you value the action. On the other hand, the overall story rating has dropped. That doesn't bother me - I have a pretty good idea why.
So folks - feedback is appreciated in any form, by me and other authors. You benefit as well as we do, so please take the time to click that button at the end of the chapter or story.
Much thanks.
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