Army brat,14 year-old Billy has had his head messed up as his Officer dad and his sleep-around slut of a mother are having marital problems. Barracks Bitch Barbie, 17 year old daughter of a general and camp commanding officer, becomes Billy's babysitter. She teaches him discipline and puts 'buck naked' and 'privates' into his regimen.
Sex Contents: Some Sex | Genre: Fan Fiction Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/Ma, BiSexual, Fan Fiction, Paranormal, Vampires, BDSM Downloads: 492 Votes:* | Score:* Size: 7KB | 1,355 words |
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Brad is humiliated and dominated by his wife and her friends; having recently had his chauvinistic world turned round, his wife goes a step further and chooses a stud, as do her friends. Brad tastes total defeat, and many other things as he is reduced to a worthless oral slave. Middle aged housewives can be so cruel.
The original version of this story drew some of the lowest scores and harshest comments I've ever received. Instead of deleting the original and writing it off, I decided to do a rewrite. If you read the first story, please read this one and let me know if it's any better, or if the whole concept just sucks rocks.