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I can't say enough good things about this story.
https://storiesonline.net/s/20945/the-dream-by-mike
It is by Mike McGifford. It covers a BDSM couple with kids who have hidden their private kinky lives from them/as they struggle with the overlaps that start to become obvious.
It is a prequel in part to the HOA story I wrote because it is about the neighbors that live next door - Karen and Mike. I wrote them in as an homage to Mike and now he is writing their origin story.
He just posted up a new chapter and it is getting better and better with each chapter.
I really enjoy Naked in School stories.
A long time ago I thought they were implausible. The basic fantasy is how embarrassing would it be to be in school nude when everybody else has on clothing.
It required a little suspension of disbelief to accept these stories could happen. It is easier for me to imagine Frodo is going to dump a magic ring in lava then it is that Administrators are going to disrupt class by having hot girls walk around titties jiggling in the hallways of a High School.
Then I start reading all these stories and watching clips on Twitter of girls who run around college naked, naked week at Universities and places like Sacremento that pass nude in public laws.
It seems entirely plausible if the premise of the story begins with the idea that they are trying to promote body positivity by demistifying and desexualizing nudity.
"Get a good long look and get it out of your system" - teens who are less curious about what is under someone else's pants are less likely to get pregnant.
The idea that dress codes that allow girls to dress like 'sluts' at school are also valid. No "Slut shaming" and not punishing the girls for dressing slutty because boys can't control themselves.
Naturally though, if the story was only a positive and uplifting story about how everyone had a better understanding that nudity was just "skin" it wouldn't make that great of a story. You need some thing interesting to happen/reality to set in.
There was a story on here (Can't remember the name) but I know it was never finished about being nude in public in Florida (24/7 requirement) although again - it seemed fairly implausible. Especially since there was no real consequence for failing to be nude.
In stories such as this - the main character was something of an exhibitionist who was comfortable being seen naked.
In most NIS stories, the main character usually is attractive but has body issues or is embarrassed - which is usually pretty interesting.
Those are the two main categories to me - do you see any other protagonists in such stories?
The set up will often vary. Usually, it is just that there is some well meaning school program and it is the students turn to participate. Often, they must permit people to look or even touch them and sometimes they have punishment/discipline for failure to comply with all the rules.
The Goldbergs story I wrote had rules. Erections were not permitted - but the solution to that was that the boys had to masturbate twice a day and could be spanked if they walked around with a boner. Real Nudist resorts don't allow people to walk around with boners (unless its a swinger resort).
No sitting on chairs - butt sweat/pussy juice/pre-cum on the chair. Standing only or kneeling.
Spanking was a big part of that story. I like stories with some consequence.
In most stories though, it's usually a very understanding and fairly vanilla school setting that seldom considers the reality of uncomfortable boners and butt sweat left behind on the chair from a bare bottom.
What other kinds of stories have you seen of NIS?
Here are a few I'd like to see:
1- Rehabilitation: Frequently late/skipping school/recieving in school suspension results in surrendering clothes for the remainder of the day.
The idea is this is not only an incentive to NOT do that but that naked students can't leave campus very easily.
The main character has been late due to her best friends's car breaking down almost every day. The two of them are in the program. When she gets home, her brother talks the parents into requiring it at home as well - to avoid the desire to sneak out at night.
2- Blackmail: The mother of the main character is fucking a young guy because he has blackmail on her. She is almost discovered serving him and his friends drinks in a thong by her daughter. "Please! don't make me keep doing this! She'll tell my husband and he'll divorce me"
"Fine, do this one thing for us and we'll let you out of it," they say. The mother has to enroll her daughter in the program at school and insist she be naked at home/24/7 at all times. She also has to voluntarily participate at well (as a condition of the blackmail). The mother tells the husband and daughter she is doing it in solidarity with her daughter though.
Naturally, the young guys come over a lot/bring cameras and cell phones and don't keep their end of the deal.
3-The Bully: Big sister is walking around school and sees a bully beating up her little brother. She tries to stop him. The bully agrees to leave the brother alone if Big Sister enters the program voluntarily.
4- Student transfers to the Alternative High School: A progressive school in california requires all students to be naked. In addition, each class incorporates that in different ways.
Naked Sports/tennis, Naked Home Economics/cooking, Naked Horse back riding, Naked lunch, naked art class, naked shop class (only safety goggles, gloves, penis protector and nipple guards)
5- Medical Research: High school is offered a grant and full college tuition to students willing participate in medical research. They are fitted with a "Fitbit" style device (perhaps not on the wrist) that will measure their bodies reaction to various stimulae. As part of these experiments they must attend class in the nude/everyday life in the nude. Anytime they are aroused the system measures it. Sometimes it injects them with a drug, or gives them a shock and tests their reaction. The Device also has a monitoring/camera on it. At times, they have to report to the lab to participate in various experiments and be measured - everything from how wide their asshole is to the diameter of their nipples.
6- Sisters: Two sisters are in the program the same week. I dunno - that's hot in and of itself.
7- George Washington Carver High School: Predominantly black gets the program. A black girl in the program is like "You better keep your eyes in your own head, Dante. I don't know what you think you looking at!!" she insists on wearing her thigh high stripper boots to school. She is paired up with one of the only white kids to go to the school. A ginger named "Angus" - he is only there because of zoning. He lives on the wrong side of the road in his suburb. Imagine having a small dick, being chubby, red-headed, freckles and being naked in almost entirely black school? That's fun.
8- Trailer Trash/Country School: The program is almost always written in middle America/white suburb type setting. Wouldn't it be interesting to have a sassy tomgirl with a country accent and long blonde hair "I don't give a god-damned. You can all kiss my ass! Have a look!"
Her mom is a stripper and her step-dad and step brother is a perv.
"Y'all act like you aint never seen titties before"
9- Goth Naked In school: Imagine a Goth Kid in the program: Hot chick with Doc Martins, Jet black hair, pail skin and the sensibilities of Wednesday Addams is in the program. What would she even do?
10 Bondage/Sexuality: I know this has been done but what if part of the NIS included understanding various fetishes and sexual relationships. "Members of the program will pair up for a non-sexual understanding of a BDSM relationship. Here are your floggers. These are not going to hurt that much if you use them properly, Okay one of you will be the dominant this week and then you'll switch next week"
Any ones I missed?
I am working on a short story side project.
I contacted Vulgus and he gave me his blessing to continue his story.
If you haven't read it - it leaves off with a lot of questions for me. I try to answer them in the follow up story.
https://storiesonline.net/s/21288:219327/chapter-1-vulgus-my-brothers-revenge-ii
I start this chapter with a dream. I wanted to grab the reader's attention and speak to the constant subtext in Vulgus's original story that as Lori engaged in her brother's sordid games, she got turned on. She still hasn't dealt with what happened.
It gets a little over the top in the dream (by intention) and then tells the reader clearly -this was a recurring dream. It sets the tone for Lori to approach Jeff about what happened.
I have one chapter. I could have also written that Jeff eventually thinks of a much better way to blackmail his sister and picked it up there.
I'd really like to hear what you think happens next/or where you'd go if you were going to continue Vulgus's story.
I was re-reading this story and I am still not done yet.
Vulgus is a classic author - sadly he doesn't write anymore on this site or anywhere that I am aware of.
The premise of this story is rather simple:
Lori and her friend Tawney smoke pot, drink wine, and have sex while the parents are away.
A-hole brother blackmails them to do what he says.
The girls are convinced their parents will send them to strict religious school if they get found out or worse.
The premise wears a little thin because the girls essentially ruin their own reputation obeying his orders in public as he humiliates them. Anyone who is present could quite easily blackmail them too/tell their parents. Tawney's little brother helps take pictures - he could have easily controlled her as well.
In addition, they agree to this without any end - essentially he owns them forever. There are no conditions. The girls never try to bargain with him - they surrender immediately.
That being said there is always this hint that the two girls were secretly getting off on it - although it is very subtle.
"I am not saying I wanted to be an involuntary slave but his dick felt good inside me and I enjoyed the way they examined our bodies so closely," kind of comments.
*spoiler alert*
The ending was never satisfying to me. In the end, a boyfriend puts the A-hole brother in the trunk and tells him never to try it again. The girl is sexually energized now and has really come of age with her body/sexuality in a mature fashion. She has the original videos and sometimes likes to fantasize about them. The summer ends with a thud.
What it never tells us is what does Jeff do after that?
Does she ever feel like payback?
What I would like to do is consider writing an add-on. Would it be sacrilege to re-open a Vulgus story and add a part two?
Who am I to stand in his shoes and tell a story that is as good?
What would that story look like anyway?
I saw a video recently that said "There is nothing more dangerous than the boredom of teenage girls". It was extremely hot.
It suggested that beneath all the glitter and mascara are girls who want to do naughty things/daring things but have no outlet.
Thoughts: I could easily do a revenge on Jeff story but I was thinking something like this:
Two weeks later. Jeff is afraid to talk to Lori.
"I am not going to bite you Jeff. Do you want to talk about what happened?"
"No,"
"Are you sure?"
"Yes!"
"What if I told you that I forgave you?"
"You don't though"
"Yes, I do. I even liked some of what you made me do,"
"Really?"
"Yeah, I still watch the tapes sometime. I am shocked that I did them now, but it was kind of wild"
"Would you do them again?"
"Well, I think my reputation is ruined enough that the threat of seeing me in a porn video is probably not going to scare me into being your obedient little slut again."
"What would?"
"What do you mean?"
"I mean like if we just pretended I had a video that was much worse,"
"You mean like robbing a bank or something?"
"Yeah, or doing crack and turning tricks in nigger town"
"Jeff don't say Nigger. That is horrible"
"Fine, doing crack and turning tricks in African American town"
"I am not sure that is any better. Let's say that I agreed. Would you let me earn the tape back after a certain amount of time? The last time you made it sound like forever."
"What will Laney say if we do this?"
"He can help you blackmail us and keep it fair,"
"Mom and Dad aren't going on vacation anytime soon"
"One of the things that scared me the most was how you'd make me your slave while they were here. If we can keep it going under their noses for two weeks then I might be willing to do it again sometime?"
"What about Tawney and Lynne?"
"I could ask them if they are down?"
Too lame? Would it not work if Lori is into it? Would it be better if Jeff strikes back and tries to control Laney/scare him off?
https://storiesonline.net/s/60550/my-brothers-revenge?ind=1
This is the original if you are interested.
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