Eddie Davidson: Blog

I sometimes read Hot Mom stories about a bimbo who is kind of stupid and wish she was just play-acting. I think part of my reason for this story had to do with writing the kind of story that would turn me on.

As I've mentioned - this is inspired by real life Twitter girls who are amateur sluts that delight in the most degrading/humiliating sexual acts and post it on Twitter. In specific, I really liked the Uber Driving Slut ones.

This story started with 4 chapters planned but it really had to take 13 chapters to tell it. I think there is still a lot to tell - including the BDSM wedding at the end.

That being said - I hope you enjoy it. Interest really started to trickle off at the end. I had a bunch of 9 and 10 votes and now I am getting a few 3 and 4 votes. I get a little confused by someone who would be interested enough to read at least 12 chapters who'd vote that low but such is life.

I am almost done with the first book of BDSM HOA. I think by now you all suspect (if you are reading the story) that Lindsay is going to head for a fall - you just don't know when/how. Matt finally got to have sex (with TWO girls!!) and that's pretty awesome for him.

I feel like the story needs to close and a new one take its place. The question that I struggle with is if I want it told from Lindsay's perspective or to continue from Matts.

I was introduced to this story by another author on here years ago.

https://zizki.com/george-pichard/marie-gabrielle

It was drawn by a French Artist named Georges Pichard.

I've finished writing Hot Mom and I am just editing it. I'm finishing up the first part of HOA.

As a SIDE project I was thinking of trying to write a story based on the graphic novel above.

The story is quite clever in that it starts with the sordid tale of Josephena. She is a widower who is caught fornicating with her nephew by her mother-in-law. In this time period, that would mean expatiation in a convent/house of corrections and constant humiliating discipline at the hands of nuns.

However, she is offered mercy in the form of serving her mother-in-law in the manner of a low-born waif for 6 months and being beaten regularly for her sins.

I've considered just writing the dialogue and describing the story in third person to see if it is as delicious on the page as it is to read.

Unless, I add a little something to it then it is a bit like when the lead singer of Warrant sings a Led Zeppelin song. Even if it is an exact replica it is never going to be as good as the original. I'd have to embellish a bit on the details of her day to day punishment and life. The story sums it up in a dozen or so pictures.

Josephena's arc come back later in the story after Marie Gabrielle is introduced. She is a noble woman full of grace and virtue. A dastardly bishop has plans to cause her fall from grace. I won't ruin the suspense and offer spoilers beyond that but the two women will meet when she picks Josephena up from a house of corrections later in the story.

Would this story interest you? or should I stick to modern day stuff?

My Game of Thrones and Historical/fantasy fiction didn't go over well in the past.

I've seen some rather popular serials about Wizards and Warriors on the site as of late. I'll be honest, I'd only read those if it was something like a Dark Elf Wizard who used sex magic. She and her brother must flee their tower and she is forced to fuck him to power her spells. If it's straight Lord of the Rings fantasy it doesn't do a lot for me.

However, a story set in the 1700s about nuns that starts with something like:

It is an essential tenant of Christian mortality that sin must be expiated through pertinence. All that was touched by sin must be purified through pertinence. Following this principle, the body contributed to sin and so therefore must be punished. The body is sin's instrument and organ so must it be it's victim and object.

Where two nuns prod and poke at a naked wretch who is forced to carry their luggage up rough stones to a woman's house of correction where she will be whipped for her laziness?

Now that has my attention! Would it have yours? Should I go back and finish Slut Summer School in good old Sebastian Florida?

What would you like to see me write next? Should I revisit an old story and add more to it? Should I work on this adaptation of the classic graphic novel? It is an opportunity cost. If I do one, I can't focus on the other.

I've reached chapter eight and I am turning on voting.

There are 5 additional completed chapters I am still editing.

If this story interests you/intrigues you after chapter 8 then please vote for it and I'll continue it to the completion.

As you may/may not know I completely re-booted the story with an all new chapter one not too long ago. I felt it set the right tone for the story as a prologue. It also added some much needed "Uber Driving Sluttery"

This story has been a real joy to write.

I was inspired by women on Twitter who do amateur porn. They seem to revel in doing the nastiest/naughtiest things they can get away with.

Hot wives who like to flash at Home Depot - spreading their ass cheeks and bending over nice and slow while they pick up a bag of fertilizer and then smile for the camera.

A sexy blue-eyed brunette who could be a traditional model snorting cum off the bathroom floor with a grin.

A woman with weights stretching out her pussy lips being dragged to her own toilet, letting her head get dunked and glub-glub-glubbing as he makes her hold her pretty face in the bowl. She blows bubbles and laughs on the third try. Afterwards, she shoots cum out of her asshole across the bathroom and crawls over and licks it from her tile floor like she is hangry.

Examples? Look up "Uber Driving Slut" @uberslutmother on Twitter. She drives Uber and gives guys rides. Sweet Buttocks, search on @flashywife and see that hot MILF revel in spreading her cute asscheeks.

These were inspirations to this story. Obviously, it is not based on their lives though.

@shaidenrogue looks like every stuck up high school cheerleader you knew in high school. She does every debased, depraved naughty thing the Hotmoms do with a smirk on her face.

I like those much more than I do any slick produced fake stuff. They live this every day. I love to see the delight in their eyes as they do some depraved, naughty thing and hold it for the camera. It seems like because their feed has 200 other sluts doing even more nasty things they feel the need to top them.

They once had a 'running butthole challenge' on Twitter. Girls filmed themselves running, jumping in the air, spreading their cheeks to show their butthole over the camera. They found all sorts of clever ways to do it - some even landing on a dildo and impaling their cute little pussies.

Writing Hot Moms was like channeling those thoughts into a story format.

I began with the intent of writing just four chapters. I wanted to see if I could do third person omniscient storytelling. It isn't my normal mode of story telling. I like to get into a character's head and tell it from their POV. The main value though was that I didn't need a lot of exposition. I could show the reader what was really going on.

I really had to stop myself at Chapter 13. I feel the story reached a natural conclusion. If there is more interest after that then I'm inclined to tell more of that story.

You know what I've never seen done very well in story format?

A BDSM wedding.

Imagine this: A Master and his submissive wife have been living the lifestyle for many years. They want to trade vows in front of friends and family and finally be open about the nature of their relationship.

You could reverse with the wife wearing the pants in the family and the man being submissive just as easily. You could even throw in a second slave if you wanted.

There are millions of people who live non-traditional lives and most if not all have vanilla family that would either be shocked, amused, offended or supportive of their decision.

The story could start with the planning: Who will the DJ be? What is the theme? Who will ordain? Bridesmaid are fellow submissives?

Who will walk the bride down the aisle and will she crawl on all fours?

The ceremony - the vows, the questions from participants, the scorn from jealous women who think its vulgar, the smirks from nephews of the brides that get to look at boobs.

Where does the ring go? Perhaps a hoop in the clit? Two in the nipples?

The reception - people can let it all hang out.

The first dance with the bride.

The dance of father and daughter?

People start to drink and eat, exchange gifts.

"We were going to get you a toaster, but we thought you could use this more"

"Oh great! Another wooden pillory! Just what we needed!"

There is a tradition where all the men line up to kiss the bride, perhaps they line up to spank her?

How about the garter ceremony when the husband takes it off and throws it to bachelors? but that's all she has on besides her collar?

And then usually the guy who caught that garter, gets to put it on the lady who caught the bouquet.

feeding each other cake? and does the bride take her meal from a bowl on the floor with a modified wedding dress designed to show her ass/jeweled buttplug?

Now for the honeymoon.

I suppose it would make a better picture story. Anyone have stories like that? willing to write one?

What if it's Mike and Carol Brady renewing their vows now that the kids are a little older?

What if its the Goldbergs? or some fanfiction/celebrity?

My challenge to you is if you don't know of a story like that - would you write one?

I started writing Hot Mom: Uber Driving Slut as a writing exercise.

My plan was simple: Write about a hot slut who drives Uber and gives guys hand jobs and sucks their cocks. I've seen women who do this, it trends on Twitter as #dirtyuber, sometimes it just means they'll drive to your house if you are local and suck you off.

It's a lot safer than walking the streets and you can pick and choose the guy in your OWN car and not his.

I wanted to give the main character (Melanie) a reason to do this other than she just thought it was a thrill. I didn't want my normal multi-chapter character build so I started with her in the midst of rough-sex and then using some flashbacks within that framework I tried to give the reasons she was the way she was.

The initial feedback was dismal to say the least.

However, I am glad I continued. I would tell myself "Okay, this is going to wrap up in 4 chapters", then I'd get to chapter 4 and say "There is more story to tell - let me do 5 chapters", now I have about 8 chapters almost ready to post and I still want to do a little more. The girls in this story are those gag-girls you see on sites like EvilAngel that want to throat as much cock and will snort jizz off a mirror just to post it on instagram for a laugh.
They seem to delight in any humiliating activity instead of being reluctant and semi-unwilling victims.I wanted to make them less 1 dimensional then sex-bags acting as life support for three holes and two boobs though.

I sometimes want reluctant and semi-unwilling victims in my stories. I especially enjoy the ones when one of them transitions from reluctant to finding some joy in their bimbofication. In this case, the story drips with that sentiment.

I cant' tell a story like that in 4 chapters. The later chapters are even hotter than the most one. I've been thinking about a BDSM wedding and I've never seen one of those done well in a story before. You know where the Groom walks the bride down the aisle on a leash and then they all buttfuck the bride for old-time sake at the reception? Something like that but with bitter ex-husbands who gnash their teeth while they see their ex-wife remarry and be happy for the first time surrendering all their dignity and authority to their new master?

I realized two things today though:
I can't keep writing the story unless I address those issues first:

1. I had edited this very fucking poorly. Despite using Word, Grammarly and the services of my good friend and fellow author Mike McGifford I had really screwed the pooch on this one (and not in a good way). The story was riddled with a mess of errors. There was a word "JAroosh" or something that I completely missed.

So I went back and sat down and read every chapter and painstakingly began to polish the turd. That's why I am calling it "HD" as in High Definition. I added more descriptions and details when I felt it was lacking and I corrected as many JaRoosh's I could find.

As a side note: I think now that I've decided a Jaroosh is that thin layer of skin between a woman's clit and the little cock head that looks like a penis head.

2. For a story titled "Uber Driving Slut" there was really not a lot of actual sex in a car with an Uber passenger. I've remedied that by adding a prologue to boost the Uber Sex by at least 100%. I also feel that it foreshadows the relationship between Melanie and Savannah.

This story is a true joy to write. My main regret is lacking the time and singular focus to write only this as I am also deeply in love with the HOA story and carefully editing it. I've also got this fantastic Slut Summer School story to finish and we've just gotten to the part where things are coming to a metaphorical head.

I ask that if you are a fan of any of my stories then you give it a read. If you see any standout grammatical errors (and I am not talking esoteric oxford comma stuff), I am talking full on "Hey, you forgot a word in this sentence" stuff that I found in the first version.

I try to write BDSM/Humiliation/sex stories with the twist of adding a little humor/real life/and make you think type stuff. I don't know if I pull that off but I do know that they make me horny.

If you've given it a read already and wouldn't mind one more go through that would be really peachy! Especially with the prologue added to the mix.

I've spent the better part of today trying to clean up my mess and add what I think is a delightful first chapter.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20972/the-hot-mom