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Ever wrote a chapter so good you didn't think you wrote it?

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I started on this site writing stories because there weren't enough stories like the ones I liked to read. I was hoping to inspire people and contribute to the community by offering some dirty stories of my own that people may like.

I've got to say some of my earliest work is pretty much garbage. I go back and look at my first Game of Thrones Story and my Fall From Heaven story and see how poor the story structure is and the grammar and I shiver a bit.

Almost no one bothered to read them. The premise was pretty bad. The first one was Sansa Stark in King's Landing being teased by Geoffery. The second was a Dark Elven Princess who is captured by Orcs and taught to be a slave in their underground caverns.

The next batch were mid-range stories. I like the story structure and the dialogue but I had no editor or feedback. I've always thought the TV show Reba was great for fan fiction. She is sort of redneckish and has a house full of girls and a hot MILF neighbor.
The story failed to gain any interest. Even now, when I see that it has 14 reads in story stats in a month I say "Wow, I am shocked!"

I wrote a couple "Naked in the Trailer Park" stories that are kind of precursors to Sunny Manor in a way. The rules of the park changed with new ownership but it wasn't supposed to be kink-friendly. The people that lived there were already there when the rules changed and the rules only changed for select people who failed to pay rent. I guess in that sense it is nothing like Sunny Manor (my current story). It was an homage to some stories I can't find on here any longer for whatever reason the author decided to pull them and I will respect that.

It was about that time I met another author who has been such a big help. I'd like to thank Mike McGifford for all his inspiration and help editing. I think without that I'd have given up.

I started to write bigger and better stories. The "Do you have a big dick, why not?" story was hot to me. A high school kid meets a shy girl at school but learns that she and her mom and sister do webcam shows at night. That was an exciting story but it needed an ending.

I carried it on a bit further from the main character's moms POV (no spoilers but there is a reason) and felt I had told her story as well.

I started to write about a situation that happened to me one Summer but I began to make it a little more like what I wished had happened. I called it Naked on Summer Vacation. The first in that series involved a strong willed Aunt who wasn't going to let me be a bratty, smart-mouthed, stick in the mud.
The second was Slut Summer School when her daughter and friends wrecked the house throwing a party and she wasn't going to let them continue being total bitches. I still haven't finished that story and intend to go back. I've got the next chapter in a rough draft format.

That being said I began to really crave two stories on here that have sat for a long time. They have amazing starts and no ending. Pinch Week and Homeowner's Association. I think this story I am doing now may be a fusion of both.

I just submitted Chapter 13. I have to say that as I re-read it before I posted it I didn't recognize my work. It was as if someone else wrote this. It was such a good chapter.

In retrospect (it would be a LOT of work to renumber everything) I would make Chapter 13 the FIRST chapter in the story and then say "Now let's rewind to two weeks ago back in Atlanta" because it really grabbed me.

Honestly, I would love to write nothing but chapters about what happened here. There was no gang bang, no ultimate torture chamber, nothing happens super intense. Yet, the dialogue and the power exchange between the characters really turned me on.

I usually write flawed characters who are liars, manipulators, bitches, cunts because when they get punished it feels a lot better to me. Some guys can enjoy a slut who really gets off on it too and I write those too.

What I do not usually write is a loving, submissive who surrenders herself not because it is a sacrifice but because she feels it is where she belongs and is thankful to do so.

It was refreshing to put her in the middle of this story.

If you havent' read HOA this is not a shameless plug. If you don't like bondage/humiliation and the themes I write about in my story codes you won't like this story no matter what.

However if you do like those themes and you haven't read HOA I'd ask you read chapter 13 first and then decide what you want to do.

Short Story Challenge: Homeowner's Association

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Would anyone consider writing a short story in the "Homeowner's Association" Universe I created for the story I am presently writing "Homeowner's Association: A Big Deal at Sunny Manor

The first 6 chapters describe the general rules, location, director etc.

It doesn't have to be Sunny Manor. You could create your own fictional clothing-optional/kink friendly community if you feel more comfortable. You could use whatever kinks work for you as well. If you don't like the way I tell try your own.

I am having more fun with the interaction and integration of a new family into the community than I am with just describing rough sex and bondage situations. Granted, I am doing a bit of both. However, just the interplay between the characters has been the most rewarding to write.

It could be a story about another family that moves there for the first time. It might be what happens on Halloween night (So many Slave Leia's going door to door) they don't call it trick or treat, it's just treat.

What about the backstory to one of the background characters? Fawn and Angelica? Bambi? Carlos and his sister Dancer?

It doesn't have have to be canon with my story. Feel free to make up the rules/people that work for your story.

I'd like to see a few if anything as inspiration.

You wouldn't believe it if I wrote it

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I am *REALLY* happy with the response to Homeowner's Association.

I have published the first 6 chapters which constitute the Tour of the facility. I did my best to really breathe life into these places. I hope I laid a framework that may even inspire other authors to write stories in Sunny Manor. I created a public Universe on SOL for it to add stories anyone else writes.

That being said I am starting the next "Section" of the story which is where the family must decide to stay or go.

Many of you may as you read this think that a clothing optional/kink friendly community is over the top.

In England, they have a TV show on public TV where people get fully naked (no pixels) and choose who they want to date. Just for no real reason other than it is fair at the end of the show the person picking must get naked too.

Sounds impossible to someone who still remember's Janet Jacksons nipple causing a meltdown in America.

In Japan, I am told they have a TV show where female contestants have to guess the dick revealed through various holes is their husband and then make it cum first to win a prize. I don't know if that is porn or real but if I wrote it into the story it would seem over the top.

In many countries they have Naked and Afraid, a man and woman are dropped off naked in the woods. Granted, they pixelate it here in America but they do show butt crack sometimes. (not sure why) - still its a vicarious thrill to watch them huddle together in the rain and the woman is like "My husband is watching this!" and the guy is like "Cool, well I am cold though"

In some Universities in the United States they have an actual nude week every year where the students are encouraged to take classes in the nude. It seems insane but they were streaking on campuses way back in the 70s. When I write a NIS story I always feel like my readers may not believe it so I have to add more plausibility.

If you read the HOA story you may at times wonder how such a place could stand a legal challenge.

First, keep in mind it is in Florida where Crystal Meth is the state bird for some reason and people who aren't driving drunk are issued a ticket. Okay, I am kidding but you know a news story about "Florida Man" is probably going to involve someone's ear or penis getting bitten off, right?

They built way out in the boonies with their own sewage, electric, etc out of county jurisdiction. Also, keep in mind there really are kink friendly clothing optional communities IN Tampa.There was a reality TV show about how many clothing optional communities there were and the real estate agent that caters to them.

I believe within the next decade there will be a BDSM game show on American Television where contestants are hung by their tits and spanked etc to endure punishments and see how long they can stand it for money. There will be a Celeb version where fading stars will come on and sit in electric chairs and get a mild shock for the amusement of the home viewer. I know it sounds crazy but I think its coming.

I am hopeful you will grant me the benefit of the doubt as you read the HOA story.

My main concern is the length of the story. I know some people get intimidated by long stories while others won't bother until it is complete and lengthy because they want an epic.

I also plan to continue the Summer School story. I just needed a refreshing break before I stick a ginger root up Clair's ass like she so richly deserves for all her shenanigans.

Voting:Homeowner's Association A Big Deal at Sunny Manor (BDSM)

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I've posted chapter four of Homeowner's Association A Big Deal at Sunny Manor (BDSM). This story follows a BDSM couple when they move into a kink-friendly/clothing optional community in Florida.

I have chapter five and six in the edit process right now. ETA is one a day for them.

The first few chapters set the tone for the story. The story starts to show some of the rules in practice. Every location they visit on the tour is named for a reason.

I wanted Sunny Manor to feel like a tour through Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory only fetish-inspired. Inside the steam-inspired are wonderous surprises to the young man telling the story of things he has never seen or only seen in pictures.

Minerva's Market, DeSade's Pantry, Chez Pichard, all of these places I wanted to feel real to you and seem memorable. I wanted you to smell the smells and feel like this place could exist. There are real clothing optional kink friendly resorts. Caliente is a good example.They like Sunny Manor have legitimate rules and membership agreements that protect them and visitors. It isn't a free-for-all fuck fest.

That being said I wanted Sunny Manor to be more than just Caliente and so I placed it in a remote section of Florida between Land O Lakes and New Port Richey. They have their own garbage, sewage, etc out there so they can avoid dealing with the county, etc.

They keep to themselves, haven't had serious crime in years. Everyone that lives there is affluent and there is a security gate around the permiter that looks like a medieval fortress. It is like that in most nudist resorts. People don't lock their doors because they don't have any place to keep the keys (well they make fobs now but not everyone wears one) and it works just fine.

I've turned on voting because I think at chapter 4 I am ready for that constructive feedback as to whether this is an homage to Mister Archie's "Homeowner's Association" or it is not. I'd like you to give it to chapter six before you expect the real story to emerge though.

Sniffles - a New Way of Life - a Good Femdom Story

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I don't have the authority to be a reviewer but I wanted to suggest a good short story for fans of Femdom.

It is a nice short story. I wish it had been longer. I wish it had delved into the wifes motivations. I didn't want her to be a ruthless Dicktatress that is just cruel. I saw in her that she wanted to be strict and at the same time she did feel something for her husband. She wasn't out fucking other dudes/using this as an excuse to go have sex with strangers.

I like that. She wanted to train her husband and instead of bringing home creampies for him to eat, he'd have to eat his own.

That being said, I suggest taking a look at Mike McGiffords Sniffles a New Way of Life.

As an aside, Master McGifford will be making a cameo in Homeowner's Associate a Big Deal At Sunny Manor I am writing. I like to write cameos of people who inspire me into my stories as an homage. If you see yourself reflected there - you'll know why.

 

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