Eddie Davidson: Blog

I was reading some awesome stuff a freind author wrote and realized most people don't write good femdom.

Most of it is where the guy is a sissy-worm, and the woman is a sex-obsessed monster who basically is using this as an excuse to fuck anyone but her husband.

I really wish it was more like a loving FLR relationship where she still wants a man - just a better one. She could fuck whoever she wants and LEAVE him if she didn't want him. She should control his orgasms, but I think I wish there was more realistic FLR/BDSM relationships like there are realistic Male Dom ones in stories. In those, the woman is a slave but she isn't a sissified maid and the man rarely fucks anyone else unless they are also his slaves.

Chapter 13 is posted. I think I could stretch the story like Karen's cunt a little bit wider/longer.

However, I really like how I ended that chapter. Do you think I should end the story and revisit my other story ideas?

Does it have a natural conclusion feel?

There are some unanswered questions like what about Marlene and Eddie and their kids, etc but I really kind of like leaving some of that to the imagination of the reader. I think the story 'arced'.

One of the writers I respect a lot on this site recently was talking to me about "Story Endings".

We are taught from an early age of TV Sitcoms that stories have to have a satisfying conclusion. An Episode of Leave it to Beaver followed a simple format:

1. Beaver encounters a problem
2. Beaver tries to solve it but fails.
3. Beaver turns to his parents who set him straight.
4. Problem usually solves itself.
5. "Gee Dad, you are the best"

There is this happy conclusion so that from one episode to the next you aren't wondering what happens.

Then there are serial stories that follow a long arc. Game of Thrones, Walking Dead etc and as we all know if we watch those shows that they often fail to "end" in any satisfying way. Lose ends still not wrapped up, main characters blown off a bridge or buried under a falling castle without any sort of epic conclusion etc.

The problem is that in real life - there is no real "ending" to the story and even when there is - it is usually not epic or satisfying.

So any time we want to make a story that is plausible, with relatable characters that we want the reader to fall in love with - we tend to find it difficult to add an 'ending' that is going to please them.

I hate endings to stories when I've fallen in love with the characters.

A lot of people are fans of the site "Literotica" which was literally designed from the get-go for short attention wank stories. Read just enough to get horny and then jerk it before you finish the first few paragraphs and close the browser.

Many people get overwhelmed by long stories. They don't realize each chapter in a long story could be seen as a mini-short story just related to the last chapter.

Short wank stories aren't my cup of tea though. I need a story with a set up, and relatable characters that has an arc. I also don't like wish-fulfillment stories.

"There I was surrounded by pussy on all sides, with more wealth than I could spend and more on the way. I had magical powers of course, and I could reverse time in case any decision I made was flawed in some way and relive the outcome a different way. I could also mind control anyone if they disagreed."

There is no challenge, no risk/all reward. Some people call it "Mary Sue" style writing. Very boring to me.

I want my protagonist to get beat up, knocked down along the journey. I need them to struggle in order to enjoy them overcoming.

The problem is that with an arc there needs to be an end. The problem is once they overcome - is there any other challenges?

This is a dilemma for me. Writing that ending where the reader agrees it is time to stop the story.

I have to decide when the characters ride off into the sunset or if I leave room for another adventure or not.

So as I write Naked Summer Vacation and It's Not Cheating if you watch, I am aware that readers are waiting for some 'ending' and at the same time dreading it because they want more of the characters.

I'd like to encourage my readers to understand and respect that I don't know that they really have 'endings'. They just have "This is where the story stopped for now," because the characters are going to continue on.

I'd like to encourage my fellow readers not to be afraid to stop a story when they feel it reached a natural conclusion but not to get overwhelmed by the concept of "Must have an ending" unless that ending is satisfying to THEM as an author.

Hi all, I am sorely overdue for some new chapters to the Summer School program and the "It's not Cheating if you watch" stories, and my apologies.

After Hurricane Dorian I was hoping to read a few stories about what a Bondage family does during the Hurricane. "Make sure you secure Mom. I don't want her blowing away!"

"Well, she is blowing away! The neighbors!! She is sucking their cocks, Sir"

"Har, har Jenny! If you don't want to join her I suggest you watch your tone and get outside and tie mom down. She can suck dicks until the winds pick up."

The other day I also had an idea for a short story called "50 shades of semen" about an interracial gangbang. Sometimes what I do after a long hiatus is write a short story to get my writing legs back.

So here is my offer to you: If you are a fan of my stories and know the themes I write about, send me a short story idea that is in keeping with that. I'd prefer to do fanfiction for a TV Show or Movie. If its a book there is a good chance I may not have read it.

A lot of the TV shows these days are dumb or difficult to write about. I've done Modern Family and I've done the Goldbergs. They seem like realistic family units. There aren't many shows like that anymore.

I tried to do a Star Trek story but I found it dry and boring. I tried to do a Walking Dead story but it was so macabre and people were too busy surviving to worry about getting nasty with each other.

So if in the next couple of days you think of something you want to read - hit me up. I may not do it/be able to do it but I'll definitely think about it.

Yesterday, I thought a Brady Bunch story challenge might excite people.

Then I realized I am old as the hills and so are the brady's and many of you may not even know who they are. Although, I still like the idea of the Patridge Family moving next door and the girls getting into catfights ending in an orgy.

In any case, I ask that you consider that Summer is basically over and it is time to write a short story "What I did on my Summer Vacation" story.

Write it from the perspective of one of your favorite characters - from a story you wrote, from a TV series, from a movie, a book, or make up one about yourself or your hot cousin!

Just write something about the summer break?

Example: One Summer, I spent in George on a horse ranch. I was bragging to everyone how I made out with this hot girl and she practically begged me to go skinny dipping.
Then she walked in and my Uncle said "Was it her?"
She was my vivacious cousin. She looked like a skinny Delta Burke with big hair and lots of makeup.

How about a story about your hottest summer if not this past summer?

Fat Tits, Big Asses, Wet Pussies, Hard Dicks - are optional should be included in every family vacation story.