Eddie Davidson: Blog

I sometimes read stories marked "Nudist Fantasies" and I have written my share of "Nude in (X place)" stories where someone is a fish out of water because they are naked where they wouldn't expected to be.

I love humiliation/bdsm type erotic stories. It is for that reason sometimes I read the Naked in School stories. They often seem so implausible simply because they would be more of a disruption to class activities and often the students singled out aren't really learning anything other than how irritating it would be to be naked in front of someone who gets to stare at them.

Has anyone who has actually been to a Naturist Resort ever considered writing a story about that? They aren't places of embaressment and humiliation. They generally frown upon swinging and over sexuality. You won't see men walking around with erections around anyone there. It just isn't done.

They are family friendly places where people fart around naked and swim. People who raise their kids there have a talk with them about what is appropriate in public. They have a talk with them about going to school so they know what is and isn't normally acceptable to other people.

If the kids at school know they get off at the nudist resort and try to tease them "You get naked" the kids are usually so well adjusted they are like "Yeah, you should come over some time"

They aren't in any hurry to see anyones private parts. To them it is just flesh. They are the least likely to have sex early for that reason.

There is virtually no crime at these parks. People carry the keys to their rooms on fobs around their wrists but most people don't even lock their door that live there year round.

They have dances, fun activities around Easter where they body paint, etc.

Imagine being the pizza guy who delivers there?

So what stories could you write there if it isn't about sex?

Same stories you write about in the clothed world.

Cypress Cove Naturist Resort down in Florida is a good example. You can read all about it by googling it.

EXAMPLES OF STORIES I'D LOVE TO SEE:

1) A family moves there from the vanilla world. The parents are naturist but the teenagers (A boy and girl) are not. The teenagers are not pressured to get naked. They can wear clothes around the park if they wish. They have an English family that lives next door with teenagers the same age that all relish the opportunity to get naked. A story about girl next door/boy next door type romance and coming of age.

2) A Femdom couple buy a trailer to live in the park year round. The man works and to most people he seems like a vanilla guy. However he is in a female-led relationship with his wife and she keeps him in a cock cage. This is the story about how the neighbors notice him doing all the chores and obeying her at the pool, and how they are a loving couple (not where she fucks all these guys) she loves him, she just likes to control and dominate him. Over time, they grow in acceptance.

3) Reverse it, The Man is the Dominant, the female is the submissive.

Adding teenagers and family that aren't aware of this relationship but will grow to understand and accept make it more personal so they are not isolated in a world of strangers. "MY sister is coming over, Gerald...
"She will see my cock cage, Ma'am"
"Yes, she will. I am prepared to explain why you have it on. It reduces your urge to masturbate and look at porn and keeps you compliant. Are you prepared to agree with me in front of her?"

4) First time couple arrive, they think it will spice up their marriage and are interested in hot tub sheninangans and swinging. They have to be discrete but once they get into the spicy wink-wink/nudge-nudge world of the regulars that live there, they realize it is a regular peyton place of wives that cheat on husbands, husbands that cheat on wives, wives that play "bridge" but really have sex parties, and gossip/scandal like any other tight knit community - just without clothes.

5) Bob is a survivalist and he is a prepper. His wife convinces him to come to a nudist colony with the family on vacation. The unthinkable occurs while they are there and his worst-case society destroyed scenario occurs. The Camp is walled on all sides to prevent looky-loos from peeping. It has it's own water, power, and food stocks. Bob has to decide to take charge, follow or get out of the way as he rebuilds society in his own image with the survivors of the nudist colony.

The Game of Thrones Gauntlet I threw down has netted ONE contestant and that is Fanfictionman with the amazing Ser Davos saves the day. I anxiously await updates and consider it some of the best writing I've seen. Truly professional grade and a clever story!

That being said, there is still time to participate! just for the fun of it, write a story set in the Game of Thrones universe?

In other news, my Slut Summer School story has reached 10 chapters. It is at this point, I feel I need to ask if people are enjoying it/it should take a different path, etc?

I've published chapter five. It should be up soon.

I've turned on comments so that you can provide feedback if you wish to do so. I'll be turning on voting after chapter six (although technically there are six chapters now since the first one is considered an introduction that sets the scene).

I feel like it takes six chapters to really get a sense for a story. We'll see if that helps me with the trolls who bomb my stories with downvotes simply because the theme of the story is not what they like. The codes/summary should have told them that.

I am mostly curious to those who are following if you enjoy it. Do you hate Blair at this point? Do you like it written from her perspective as opposed to Eddie in the last story (Sissy Summer Camp)?

Already better than Season Eight! (Which admittedly sets the bar low) I would call Game of Thrones: How Davos Saved the Day by Fan Fiction Man above and beyond!!

This is the first contender for the challenge (which doesn't end until next month 6/21 so there is plenty of time).

Fan Fiction Man posted the first chapter yesterday. I don't want to come off like a RR.Martin fanboi but FF nailed the writing style of RR Martin IMHO.

The characters popped and behaved as they would be expected to act. There was nothing gratuitous or over the top in this story. It was like reading a chapter out of the novels. The dialogue was spot on and this is the FIRST chapter (implying that this is not just a short story but possibly a serial).

There is still time to join in the challenge and post something but this is a strong contender for the top spot. I will certainly be following this story and I hope you will give it a read!

Well done!

I originally had the brilliant and highly creative idea to name the sequel to "Naked On Summer Vacation" by the clever title "Naked on Summer Vacation 2".

They do after all follow each other sequentially and the convention makes sense.

However, after due deliberation, I realized that doesn't do the stories justice. They are vastly different stories told from two different perspectives. They can stand alone by themselves.

So as way of explanation, let me explain:

Naked on Summer Vacation: Sissy Summer School is the story set in 1984 as told by Eddie about his Aunt. He was a pervy little know-it-all visiting Florida. It involves Femdom and humiliation.

There are literally stories about eating people while they are still alive on this site and at least a dozen stories about training one's daughter as a sex slave in the top 50 at all times. However, it was the first time I received snitty hate mail on this site. I am assuming because the subject of the humiliation was me and not a girl and that is unusual. I suggested they read the summary and the codes but apparently, that is reserved for non-twits only.

The new story - which I am enjoying writing tremendously is Naked on Summer Vacation: Slut Summer School. It is written from my cousin Blair's perspective and immediately follows the events of the first story. However, you do not have to read the first one to get the second one. A good story can stand on it's own. It would provide you some context. However, why I think this is good is because when girls are the subject of the training it is a different read for most. Eddie is still present, so be prepared for that but he is not the focus.

In other updates:

It is not cheating if you watch is paused at chapter 5. Is there a Chapter 6? like the Walking Dead, we are on the season finale and you'll just have to wait to find out. I can only focus on one story at a time and do it justice.

The Game of Thrones Challenge: I've had a few people PM me their ideas. A proper ending to the show? going back to earlier times? Sure. It's all good.

If you want to set Game of Thrones in a futuristic setting where they are now the Seven Planets and there are Space Dragons or tell a story about a peasant farmer and his family eeking out an existence under constant threat of endless wars - be my guest! Just put Game of Thrones in the title and post it in the next 30 days or so if you want to be in the challenge.

What am I reading:

I love this site. I keep checking it so frequently lately. I've researched as many older stories as I can with story codes that now I am relying on new stuff. If dirty stories were liquid my cup ranneth over and I am still thirsty.

That being said I recently saw an author write some fantastic stories that were really 'cutting edge' is the best metaphor I can use. They used themes and ideas I've never considered erotic before and found ways to make me care about the fate of the characters.

I was excited to see them continue.

Then recently they wrote a story that was basically just a bunch of vignettes of dirty talk loosely connected by some plausible actions.

In other words: Nadine sucked his balls, then she sucked this, then he put this there, then this, then that, (Then a short sentence about why Nadine is even there) then two more paragraphs of dirty stuff.

The score was through the roof. I wrote the author to say that maybe it was just me, but I couldn't even follow the plot. They wrote back to tell me that they determined through experimentation that this sort of shallow sex description scores amazingly well and that the stories I had fallen in love would be discontinued post-haste and even that the site had fallen short of their expectation and they were seeking a new place to host their creative talent.

I've been sad about that. Not just because this author's talent is being wasted catering to the lowest common denominator but because of the realization that shallow sugar-cereal type porn is going to score high when my Hearty Bran Muffin reality stuff is always going to appeal to only a select few group of perverts.

I am still making the hearty bran muffin reality stuff because I can't write the equivilent of the five Kardashian reality TV shows in porn form and wouldn't want too if I could. It is a shallow vapid world but people like what they like. If descriptions of horny sex without much characterization gets them off then who am I to judge that?

An erotic story to me has to make me give a shit about why the person is there and what they are doing. They don't have to learn a lesson or be a better person at the end. I just don't care that Nadine drained his balls unless I know a little about Nadine and the balls she is draining to want to read about it. I am probably not explaining that correctly but get me to fall in love or identify with a character and I'll fall in love with the story.

Sadly though, I am stuck without a new series to read.

But there is GOOD NEWS. There is an author on this site (and I won't say much more about them then that) that is writing a story so cool and exciting that I've found it difficult to think about anything else since I had a sliver of the insight. It is a continuation/reboot of sorts of an older story that fizzled. That will give me closure on those characters but it will also take them in a direction they should have always gone. I don't know the title and even if I did I am not sure I am at liberty to say yet since it's still being developed but damn - it is what I am excited about.

is this site perfect? No. But I love it. The admin is super responsive. The interface is clean. I hope the new author finds a site to their liking but honestly I wish they would stay and find an audience.