Eddie Davidson: Blog

I am going to turn on voting when I publish chapter seven.

If you haven't seen it yet the link is here.



It doesn't seem like it is that popular. I am not sure if it's because it is fan fiction for a TV show and has a little comedic element in it. The characters are funny. I could have made them generic but then you would miss out on this:

https://www.imagefap.com/photo/302306296/

That is what I use as inspiration as I write this story. Not quite as perky as the tits as I write in the story but close enough.

I am enjoying writing it but I am wondering if anyone is really enjoying reading it. There are some twists and turns coming and it is going to get hotter soon.

I'll wait until chapter 7 to turn on voting. If based on getting bombed in voting it seems people don't like it, I'll move on to something else.

I do hope people give it a chance.

I'd like to give you a little insight into my next steps.

YES, I am going to write a sequel to the HOA: Big Day in Sunny Manor story.

It is called HOA: As the Worm Turns. If you haven't read my first HOA story I won't spoil it for you. If you have then you know what is coming next!! It picks up where the other left off.

Before I begin I am working on a short story based on the Goldbergs characters. I need to write a little to make sure I don't get burned out on the same story. That happened to me in the past. I was doing a chapter a day. It doesn't take long to write them at all. It is all the editing afterward that takes the most time.

The premise of the Goldbergs that the son ordered some mind control drugs from Penthouse Magazine. It's just sugar pills but he doesn't know that. His mom and sister try to teach him a lesson and follow his orders. The first couple chapters are a little slow but I have 8 chapters in the process of editing right now - I don't know how long this story will last.

One thing I am doing with this story is trying out something that MAY help in the HOA story (more about that later).

I may do one more short story as well. It would most likely be a Historical BDSM story that takes place via a series of letters from a young girl in Victorian France and then America. The Letters would set up a series of rather unfortunate events that tell a sordid tale of humiliation, bondage, etc in the style of Georges Prichard. I've done a little research on bawdy novels from the time period like Fanny Hill and I'd quite like to try emulating the style of writing in that time period.

I am SO thankful to my fellow author Mike McGifford. If not for his help and inspiration I could not have written HOA: Big Day in Sunny Manor.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20891/homeowners-association-by-eddie

Located here.

I want to also mention his amazing project. It is a story that you may not have noticed that parallels mine.

Located here:

https://storiesonline.net/s/20945/the-dream-by-mike?ind=1

If you give it a read you'll notice the next door neighbor's from the Camdens in my story. It is several years earlier before they moved to Sunny Manor. It sets up their origin story!!!

I've been talking with Mike back and forth about this story and we are really excited. One thing that it tackles is how a BDSM couple might realistically approach telling their kids if they are committed to a 24/7 lifestyle.

"Look, we are a BDSM couple. This is what it means, do you have any questions?"

Like most couples they don't start out 24/7. The title comes from the idea that it started with a dream that they could. Naturally, real life gets in the way. School, Friends, Work, the Kids, Bills, all of those reasons block their dreams.

The story is published slowly. (In part because we are savoring the chapters and really trying to polish them). I'd appreciate it if you gave it a read and a positive vote/comment/feedback to the author. I think when you read chapter 5 or 6 you'll be blown away.

I also have one more favor to ask you if you have read the HOA story.

Take a look at this story if you get a chance.

https://storiesonline.net/s/21196/the-goldbergs-mail-order

There are only four chapters as of this writing. I've taken a chance with how I constructed this story.

I have tried to tell a story much like the format of a television show. In stories they are often extremely linear. You start at the start and follow a single character's journey to the end.

In this one, I've told the story from a few different POV including a 3rd person omniscient (like a TV show would). The reader sees everything and there is no perspective. My goal is that when I shift to Adam telling his version of events the reader is not jarred out of the action and it is a subtle transition.

I sometimes hit the reader with the classic "Meanwhile Downstairs," and then other times I have tried to present the events that preceded this/set these things into motion afterward. The idea is to build a little suspense.

I've done this sparingly - at least at first to get the reader used to the idea that this can happen.

Then as I reach later chapters I move the story forward and shift back to Erica's Freshman year to add some context to why she is really doing the things she is doing. I am not trying to confuse the reader. I want to see if I can bring them along two distinct plots to the same spot on the X/Y axis and then join the story together again as a whole.

The reason I want to try this is that I think it would be fantastic if I could use this manner of story telling in the next HOA story. In the first one you only ever heard what Matt was thinking and feeling. It may be interesting if you understood why his father did the things he did. It may have provided context that you missed out on.

If it turns out to be a flub/failure then fine. It's also a really fun/hot story. I am enjoying writing it. Let me know in feedback or comments if you have constructive thoughts.

Give it to chapter 6 or 7 before I turn on voting though.

I am posting up the third chapter of the Goldbergs: Control Anyone Get A Head.

If you haven't read it yet - it is a twist on a mind control story. The mind control is garbage - it doesn't work. Yet, Beverly (The Mom) and Erica (The Sister) are pretending it is to prank him and win a bet with each other.

I've built things up slowly in these first three chapters. I wanted to convey the humor of the Goldbergs (not quite as much as the show) but a little because that is who these characters are.

I find that the entire show is a little implausible on some level. I've tried to capture the feel while balancing it with the "Respect the Reader's Intelligence" approach of making this fun situation/misadventure seem like it could happen under these circumstances.

I find if you jump right in and tell the subjects to start sucking cocks behind dumpsters or walking down the street naked you have no where else to go anyway in a story because they'll already do anything and everything. What I enjoy about the slow build is that the subjects are choosing to do this, and they are finding easier to lose their inhibitions by cajoling each other to continue. They are finding "Okay if topless is acceptable then why not nudity" slippery slope as a premise basically.

I would love if it there was a poll option but I have some questions for you (AFTER you read Chapter 3)

1 - Do you want me to continue or write something else (And why)

2- Is this story plausible to you that it could happen in these circumstances?

3- Right now it is a fun story with flashing/humiliation and probably going to move quickly into light bondage/spanking and the like.

Unlike a lot of my stories that include more involved bondage like cages/whips and chains, gang bangs etc

Would you prefer I continue with the current tone until I reach a place where I feel like the plausibility of what these women will do to win a bet has been reached?

or do you think I should go a little over the top to include a lot of the elements of my past stories?

If you don't have any clue who the Goldsbergs are but want a nice little refresher - try this link

https://youtu.be/n43fM2wdu5A

I just finished the 33 chapter "HOA" story. It is a story about a BDSM couple that moves to a kink friendly community with their vanilla family. I felt it was really epic and one of the best things I've ever written. There is betrayal, laughter, love, incest, bondage, humiliation - all the stuff I like to read in a story.

I plan to write a sequel. It is practically screaming to be the MAIN story that is set up by this one.

I just started a new project that I am excited about. It is called
"The Goldbergs: Control Anyone - Get A Head!"

I don't know how long the story will be quite yet. I am really having fun with it and I am five chapters deep in already. I love long stories because that gives you time to fall in love with the characters and watch them grow/evolve during the story.
Short stories don't give me that satisfying crunch when something happens that changes the course of their lives.

Many of you already know this zany TV family though. If you don't PLEASE watch this;


If you can't watch it because it you can't click on the link - don't worry - you can still catch a clip or two of them on any streaming service and get all you want to know about them.

Not every story on this site is for me (nor should it be). One of the genres I generally avoid is "Mind Control Stories". No matter how well written.

The reason is not plausibility. I can believe some powerful pill or magic power makes someone your personal slave for story purposes.

It is that when someone is under mind control they lose all their choices and that takes them from active participant in the action to passive observer. I am inclined to empathize with them and feel badly that they have to do things they are not interested in and would never choose in real life.

If the same person were blackmailed into it or did it because they wanted to win some bet/dare then I would probably love it!! That's because they had a choice and they chose to play the game.

So why would I write a Goldberg fan fiction about Mind Control if I don't like the genre?

The reasoning is simple. The Mind Control doesn't work.

The set up is simple. I took a page from my own 1980s upbringing. Do you remember those ads in the back of dirty magazines promising to sell you Spanish Fly that would turn any girl into your willing sex slave?

Adam orders those with the intent to be big man at school

Problem is how do you get girls to take a pill?

"Hey there cute girl. I am that creepy guy that you aren't interested in. Would you like to take this pill?"

So Adam decides to put it in a tea. However, he still can't get girls at school to drink hot tea.

He tries the tea out on his family just to see what happens. He wants to run 'field tests'. It does nothing to the males in the house.

He doesn't know it but his sister and mom snooped through his room and knew he had it. They are offended when he tries to give it to them. They decide to play a prank on him and pretend to fall under its spell.

"It only works on females!! Oh lucky day" the poor schmuck thinks.

The Sister and Mom are insanely competitive. What starts as a simple prank spirals into a contest of wills that leads to nudity and other sexual situations (no spoilers).

There is a fine line between the plausibility "Yeah this could really happen" and "Wow, this set of circumstances makes the story fun" that the producer of the TV show runs every week.

He's had Erica borrow her dad's FAVORITE baby of a car without permission and let it roll off a cliff. He's had the family go on a full on homage to the National Lampoon Vacation movie recreating their iconic experiences.

All in all, what I am trying to do in writing this is excite you while making you feel "Okay, I could see how that could happen IF all of these circumstances came along with it"

I hope you enjoy the ride.

Homeowner's association began as an homage to two stories.

1. Pinch Week by Smackmagnet

https://storiesonline.net/s/15950/pinch-week

2. Homeowner's Association by Mister Archie

https://storiesonline.net/s/18082/homeowners-association

You can find them both on this site at these links.

Neither are finished -which is a pity.

In Pinch Week, another Lindsay torments her little brother to a point that the parents give him a payback week. The subtext is they are in a BDSM relationship themselves.

In HOA, its about a community like Sunny Manor and I hope I did it justice.

We've one more chapter (33) to the exciting conclusion.

I've already started polishing it. I am hoping it is epic/fun/exciting and closes some loops for you.

Will there be a second story? You bet. In the meantime I have a few small projects I want to work on. I started a Goldsberg fanfiction.

This Halloween's episode on ABC was one where Beverly (the mom) bought some "Fine Art" (which was just pictures of bare butt ladies) and hung them in the house. That inspired me to write this story. It's not about that but I felt she had a healthy body image and I wanted to do a lighter story.

The set up is simple: Adam (her son) buys mind control pills. Except they are just placebo. Bev and her daughter decide to teach him a lesson by playing along. I hope you enjoy that as an intermission after the long awaited conclusion of HOA: BDSM (Big Day at Sunny Manor)

ETA on final chapter: Sunday or Monday