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I am posting up the third chapter of the Goldbergs: Control Anyone Get A Head.

If you haven't read it yet - it is a twist on a mind control story. The mind control is garbage - it doesn't work. Yet, Beverly (The Mom) and Erica (The Sister) are pretending it is to prank him and win a bet with each other.

I've built things up slowly in these first three chapters. I wanted to convey the humor of the Goldbergs (not quite as much as the show) but a little because that is who these characters are.

I find that the entire show is a little implausible on some level. I've tried to capture the feel while balancing it with the "Respect the Reader's Intelligence" approach of making this fun situation/misadventure seem like it could happen under these circumstances.

I find if you jump right in and tell the subjects to start sucking cocks behind dumpsters or walking down the street naked you have no where else to go anyway in a story because they'll already do anything and everything. What I enjoy about the slow build is that the subjects are choosing to do this, and they are finding easier to lose their inhibitions by cajoling each other to continue. They are finding "Okay if topless is acceptable then why not nudity" slippery slope as a premise basically.

I would love if it there was a poll option but I have some questions for you (AFTER you read Chapter 3)

1 - Do you want me to continue or write something else (And why)

2- Is this story plausible to you that it could happen in these circumstances?

3- Right now it is a fun story with flashing/humiliation and probably going to move quickly into light bondage/spanking and the like.

Unlike a lot of my stories that include more involved bondage like cages/whips and chains, gang bangs etc

Would you prefer I continue with the current tone until I reach a place where I feel like the plausibility of what these women will do to win a bet has been reached?

or do you think I should go a little over the top to include a lot of the elements of my past stories?

If you don't have any clue who the Goldsbergs are but want a nice little refresher - try this link

https://youtu.be/n43fM2wdu5A

I just finished the 33 chapter "HOA" story. It is a story about a BDSM couple that moves to a kink friendly community with their vanilla family. I felt it was really epic and one of the best things I've ever written. There is betrayal, laughter, love, incest, bondage, humiliation - all the stuff I like to read in a story.

I plan to write a sequel. It is practically screaming to be the MAIN story that is set up by this one.

I just started a new project that I am excited about. It is called
"The Goldbergs: Control Anyone - Get A Head!"

I don't know how long the story will be quite yet. I am really having fun with it and I am five chapters deep in already. I love long stories because that gives you time to fall in love with the characters and watch them grow/evolve during the story.
Short stories don't give me that satisfying crunch when something happens that changes the course of their lives.

Many of you already know this zany TV family though. If you don't PLEASE watch this;


If you can't watch it because it you can't click on the link - don't worry - you can still catch a clip or two of them on any streaming service and get all you want to know about them.

Not every story on this site is for me (nor should it be). One of the genres I generally avoid is "Mind Control Stories". No matter how well written.

The reason is not plausibility. I can believe some powerful pill or magic power makes someone your personal slave for story purposes.

It is that when someone is under mind control they lose all their choices and that takes them from active participant in the action to passive observer. I am inclined to empathize with them and feel badly that they have to do things they are not interested in and would never choose in real life.

If the same person were blackmailed into it or did it because they wanted to win some bet/dare then I would probably love it!! That's because they had a choice and they chose to play the game.

So why would I write a Goldberg fan fiction about Mind Control if I don't like the genre?

The reasoning is simple. The Mind Control doesn't work.

The set up is simple. I took a page from my own 1980s upbringing. Do you remember those ads in the back of dirty magazines promising to sell you Spanish Fly that would turn any girl into your willing sex slave?

Adam orders those with the intent to be big man at school

Problem is how do you get girls to take a pill?

"Hey there cute girl. I am that creepy guy that you aren't interested in. Would you like to take this pill?"

So Adam decides to put it in a tea. However, he still can't get girls at school to drink hot tea.

He tries the tea out on his family just to see what happens. He wants to run 'field tests'. It does nothing to the males in the house.

He doesn't know it but his sister and mom snooped through his room and knew he had it. They are offended when he tries to give it to them. They decide to play a prank on him and pretend to fall under its spell.

"It only works on females!! Oh lucky day" the poor schmuck thinks.

The Sister and Mom are insanely competitive. What starts as a simple prank spirals into a contest of wills that leads to nudity and other sexual situations (no spoilers).

There is a fine line between the plausibility "Yeah this could really happen" and "Wow, this set of circumstances makes the story fun" that the producer of the TV show runs every week.

He's had Erica borrow her dad's FAVORITE baby of a car without permission and let it roll off a cliff. He's had the family go on a full on homage to the National Lampoon Vacation movie recreating their iconic experiences.

All in all, what I am trying to do in writing this is excite you while making you feel "Okay, I could see how that could happen IF all of these circumstances came along with it"

I hope you enjoy the ride.

Homeowner's association began as an homage to two stories.

1. Pinch Week by Smackmagnet

https://storiesonline.net/s/15950/pinch-week

2. Homeowner's Association by Mister Archie

https://storiesonline.net/s/18082/homeowners-association

You can find them both on this site at these links.

Neither are finished -which is a pity.

In Pinch Week, another Lindsay torments her little brother to a point that the parents give him a payback week. The subtext is they are in a BDSM relationship themselves.

In HOA, its about a community like Sunny Manor and I hope I did it justice.

We've one more chapter (33) to the exciting conclusion.

I've already started polishing it. I am hoping it is epic/fun/exciting and closes some loops for you.

Will there be a second story? You bet. In the meantime I have a few small projects I want to work on. I started a Goldsberg fanfiction.

This Halloween's episode on ABC was one where Beverly (the mom) bought some "Fine Art" (which was just pictures of bare butt ladies) and hung them in the house. That inspired me to write this story. It's not about that but I felt she had a healthy body image and I wanted to do a lighter story.

The set up is simple: Adam (her son) buys mind control pills. Except they are just placebo. Bev and her daughter decide to teach him a lesson by playing along. I hope you enjoy that as an intermission after the long awaited conclusion of HOA: BDSM (Big Day at Sunny Manor)

ETA on final chapter: Sunday or Monday

I sometimes read Hot Mom stories about a bimbo who is kind of stupid and wish she was just play-acting. I think part of my reason for this story had to do with writing the kind of story that would turn me on.

As I've mentioned - this is inspired by real life Twitter girls who are amateur sluts that delight in the most degrading/humiliating sexual acts and post it on Twitter. In specific, I really liked the Uber Driving Slut ones.

This story started with 4 chapters planned but it really had to take 13 chapters to tell it. I think there is still a lot to tell - including the BDSM wedding at the end.

That being said - I hope you enjoy it. Interest really started to trickle off at the end. I had a bunch of 9 and 10 votes and now I am getting a few 3 and 4 votes. I get a little confused by someone who would be interested enough to read at least 12 chapters who'd vote that low but such is life.

I am almost done with the first book of BDSM HOA. I think by now you all suspect (if you are reading the story) that Lindsay is going to head for a fall - you just don't know when/how. Matt finally got to have sex (with TWO girls!!) and that's pretty awesome for him.

I feel like the story needs to close and a new one take its place. The question that I struggle with is if I want it told from Lindsay's perspective or to continue from Matts.

I was introduced to this story by another author on here years ago.

https://zizki.com/george-pichard/marie-gabrielle

It was drawn by a French Artist named Georges Pichard.

I've finished writing Hot Mom and I am just editing it. I'm finishing up the first part of HOA.

As a SIDE project I was thinking of trying to write a story based on the graphic novel above.

The story is quite clever in that it starts with the sordid tale of Josephena. She is a widower who is caught fornicating with her nephew by her mother-in-law. In this time period, that would mean expatiation in a convent/house of corrections and constant humiliating discipline at the hands of nuns.

However, she is offered mercy in the form of serving her mother-in-law in the manner of a low-born waif for 6 months and being beaten regularly for her sins.

I've considered just writing the dialogue and describing the story in third person to see if it is as delicious on the page as it is to read.

Unless, I add a little something to it then it is a bit like when the lead singer of Warrant sings a Led Zeppelin song. Even if it is an exact replica it is never going to be as good as the original. I'd have to embellish a bit on the details of her day to day punishment and life. The story sums it up in a dozen or so pictures.

Josephena's arc come back later in the story after Marie Gabrielle is introduced. She is a noble woman full of grace and virtue. A dastardly bishop has plans to cause her fall from grace. I won't ruin the suspense and offer spoilers beyond that but the two women will meet when she picks Josephena up from a house of corrections later in the story.

Would this story interest you? or should I stick to modern day stuff?

My Game of Thrones and Historical/fantasy fiction didn't go over well in the past.

I've seen some rather popular serials about Wizards and Warriors on the site as of late. I'll be honest, I'd only read those if it was something like a Dark Elf Wizard who used sex magic. She and her brother must flee their tower and she is forced to fuck him to power her spells. If it's straight Lord of the Rings fantasy it doesn't do a lot for me.

However, a story set in the 1700s about nuns that starts with something like:

It is an essential tenant of Christian mortality that sin must be expiated through pertinence. All that was touched by sin must be purified through pertinence. Following this principle, the body contributed to sin and so therefore must be punished. The body is sin's instrument and organ so must it be it's victim and object.

Where two nuns prod and poke at a naked wretch who is forced to carry their luggage up rough stones to a woman's house of correction where she will be whipped for her laziness?

Now that has my attention! Would it have yours? Should I go back and finish Slut Summer School in good old Sebastian Florida?

What would you like to see me write next? Should I revisit an old story and add more to it? Should I work on this adaptation of the classic graphic novel? It is an opportunity cost. If I do one, I can't focus on the other.