Eddie Davidson: Blog

The final two chapters of the Goldbergs are pretty intense. I hope you enjoy them. I could have written a few more chapters about Beverly and Erica as slut puppies but I think the arc has concluded.

I'll be posting Chapter 11 after I finish some final edits. I hope you have followed along with it. I'd love to see other stories with a similar premise.

It is basically a story about a dare. The dare is to pretend you are under mind-control and see how far you can go with a straight face.

I could easily picture it being much like a game of truth or dare.

I am still not ready to immerse myself into the sequel of HOA. I am gathering my thoughts and making notes though. I started to write it in the voice of Froggy (the younger sister) but I wasn't entirely happy with that. I thought it may give the story a different perspective but it didn't feel quite right.

I've got a few half-started single chapter stories I started as well that I've been futzing with. Stay tuned though and I'll share with you my next plans.

In the mean time, may I plug my friend Mike McGifford's story?
"The Dream" covers the time when Mike and Karen are first starting their BDSM journey and dealing with their own vanilla family. These are the neighbors that live in Sunny Manor in the HOA story.

Mike is on Chapter Five and I hope you will give it a read. I think you will enjoy it if you liked HOA. There is a realness about these characters that give them a lot of flavor and nuance.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20945/the-dream-by-mike

I think I am nearing completion of the Goldbergs: Mind Control Story.

I believe it is going to be 11 chapters. We'll have to see as I do the final edits. I've appreciated the support so far as I finish it out.

I wanted to share with you another cool youtube link if you aren't that familiar with the characters
https://youtu.be/4CBAEwChsgY

The best of Erica Goldberg - very helpful when picturing her many facial expressions.

In other news, I am still working on a few short stories before I begin the second book of HOA. I assume HOA would take a better part of a year and I don't want to lose focus once I start.

That being said I have a couple ideas for new stories. I thought I'd share them with you:

1 - A Series of Victorian Style Letters from a young woman to her beau. The story would be told through her descriptions of events. I've never tried a story like this. In the first letter, she would explain that her mother was caught having sexual relations with her Uncle. Her mother was given a choice to attend the house of corrections of an adultress or spend six months in a peasants garb being punished at the house/serving. It will get wicked from there. Inspired by George Pichard and Victorian bawdy tales of revenge and wickedness.

2- A Story about a boy and two girls. The girls move in next door. He spies on them and discovers his Aunt disciplines them. They are naked with their hands cuffed behind their back.

Chapter Seven is a turning point in the story that gets more intense.

I've turned on voting to see if people are enjoying it.

I've also got a quick video for an introduction to the characters:

https://youtu.be/n43fM2wdu5A

I am going to turn on voting when I publish chapter seven.

If you haven't seen it yet the link is here.



It doesn't seem like it is that popular. I am not sure if it's because it is fan fiction for a TV show and has a little comedic element in it. The characters are funny. I could have made them generic but then you would miss out on this:

https://www.imagefap.com/photo/302306296/

That is what I use as inspiration as I write this story. Not quite as perky as the tits as I write in the story but close enough.

I am enjoying writing it but I am wondering if anyone is really enjoying reading it. There are some twists and turns coming and it is going to get hotter soon.

I'll wait until chapter 7 to turn on voting. If based on getting bombed in voting it seems people don't like it, I'll move on to something else.

I do hope people give it a chance.

I'd like to give you a little insight into my next steps.

YES, I am going to write a sequel to the HOA: Big Day in Sunny Manor story.

It is called HOA: As the Worm Turns. If you haven't read my first HOA story I won't spoil it for you. If you have then you know what is coming next!! It picks up where the other left off.

Before I begin I am working on a short story based on the Goldbergs characters. I need to write a little to make sure I don't get burned out on the same story. That happened to me in the past. I was doing a chapter a day. It doesn't take long to write them at all. It is all the editing afterward that takes the most time.

The premise of the Goldbergs that the son ordered some mind control drugs from Penthouse Magazine. It's just sugar pills but he doesn't know that. His mom and sister try to teach him a lesson and follow his orders. The first couple chapters are a little slow but I have 8 chapters in the process of editing right now - I don't know how long this story will last.

One thing I am doing with this story is trying out something that MAY help in the HOA story (more about that later).

I may do one more short story as well. It would most likely be a Historical BDSM story that takes place via a series of letters from a young girl in Victorian France and then America. The Letters would set up a series of rather unfortunate events that tell a sordid tale of humiliation, bondage, etc in the style of Georges Prichard. I've done a little research on bawdy novels from the time period like Fanny Hill and I'd quite like to try emulating the style of writing in that time period.

I am SO thankful to my fellow author Mike McGifford. If not for his help and inspiration I could not have written HOA: Big Day in Sunny Manor.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20891/homeowners-association-by-eddie

Located here.

I want to also mention his amazing project. It is a story that you may not have noticed that parallels mine.

Located here:

https://storiesonline.net/s/20945/the-dream-by-mike?ind=1

If you give it a read you'll notice the next door neighbor's from the Camdens in my story. It is several years earlier before they moved to Sunny Manor. It sets up their origin story!!!

I've been talking with Mike back and forth about this story and we are really excited. One thing that it tackles is how a BDSM couple might realistically approach telling their kids if they are committed to a 24/7 lifestyle.

"Look, we are a BDSM couple. This is what it means, do you have any questions?"

Like most couples they don't start out 24/7. The title comes from the idea that it started with a dream that they could. Naturally, real life gets in the way. School, Friends, Work, the Kids, Bills, all of those reasons block their dreams.

The story is published slowly. (In part because we are savoring the chapters and really trying to polish them). I'd appreciate it if you gave it a read and a positive vote/comment/feedback to the author. I think when you read chapter 5 or 6 you'll be blown away.

I also have one more favor to ask you if you have read the HOA story.

Take a look at this story if you get a chance.

https://storiesonline.net/s/21196/the-goldbergs-mail-order

There are only four chapters as of this writing. I've taken a chance with how I constructed this story.

I have tried to tell a story much like the format of a television show. In stories they are often extremely linear. You start at the start and follow a single character's journey to the end.

In this one, I've told the story from a few different POV including a 3rd person omniscient (like a TV show would). The reader sees everything and there is no perspective. My goal is that when I shift to Adam telling his version of events the reader is not jarred out of the action and it is a subtle transition.

I sometimes hit the reader with the classic "Meanwhile Downstairs," and then other times I have tried to present the events that preceded this/set these things into motion afterward. The idea is to build a little suspense.

I've done this sparingly - at least at first to get the reader used to the idea that this can happen.

Then as I reach later chapters I move the story forward and shift back to Erica's Freshman year to add some context to why she is really doing the things she is doing. I am not trying to confuse the reader. I want to see if I can bring them along two distinct plots to the same spot on the X/Y axis and then join the story together again as a whole.

The reason I want to try this is that I think it would be fantastic if I could use this manner of story telling in the next HOA story. In the first one you only ever heard what Matt was thinking and feeling. It may be interesting if you understood why his father did the things he did. It may have provided context that you missed out on.

If it turns out to be a flub/failure then fine. It's also a really fun/hot story. I am enjoying writing it. Let me know in feedback or comments if you have constructive thoughts.

Give it to chapter 6 or 7 before I turn on voting though.