Eddie Davidson: Blog

I've concluded the Keeping my Sister in Line story. I have a chapter 16 but so far I am not happy with it - so it may end up as a bonus (boner) chapter.

I am still working with Fanfictionman on "Manny's Pills" - we take turns writing a chapter although we have gone a little out of order due to timing.

It's set in the TV show "Modern Family" and after Luke tries placebo mind control pills on his sisters - a chain of events begins involving hypnosis. We had to agree upon how it works in that world - triggers and conditions and the general rules of it. Then each author takes a turn.

I think we are nearing an end now though.

So - I am thinking about my next project. I have a few unfinished stories to futz with. However, I have an offer to make:

If you like my stories and want to propose some sort of setting - I am willing to try round robin story telling with you. You write the first chapter. I write the next. We take turns.
We each agree to maybe create three of the main characters independently and then create side characters as needed.

No particular setting but understand I am not particularly fond/good at writing sci-fi.

I've done fanfiction in the Goldbergs and Modern Family.
I've done fantasy in Game of Thrones.
I've done historical fiction set in 18th century Paris

But my forte is setting stories in either trailer parks and middle america suburbs in the modern period.

So pitch me an idea before you do anything and let's see if we tickle each other's fancies. I don't care who posts it. Only one of us can post to the story - so I would send you my chapter through the internal mail system.

Recently I disvovered Galtabs "central city" stories.

I have to admit at first I thought they may be generic but after reading them I really love the setting - but more so the writing.

So much so I dabbled with a fanfic "taking the kids to the zoo" based on her setting.

The part that I really enjoy is all the nuanced details. The story is never slow but it always seems to be on high definition of the world around the characters.

Always written current tense single Pov in 1st person. A difficult style for me to write but almost effortless.

I recently asked for mother's day stories. This one while set in Thanksgiving truly raises the bar even higher.

https://storiesonline.net/s/11841:227086/chapter-1-home-for-thanksgiving

I can't say enough good things about this story. If you like what I write, you will LOVE what she writes.

Challenge to all authors this weekend.

It's Mother's day weekend.

We all need a break from bad news and so how about a good old fashioned story challenge?

Time to write a story about mothers.
It could be sweet.
IT could be sexy.
It could be about BDSM
It could be about a dominant mother who is meeting her daughter's husband for the first time.
It could be about a submissive mother who is meeting her daughter's husband for the first time.
It could be whatever the hell you want.

Include:
Mother's Day Story Challenge: in the title of your story.

Let's see how many we can get this weekend!!
No voting, no contest - no judging - everyone wins. Write something about mothers or if you prefer write about some motherfuckers. That works too!

I am personally always curious how a lifestyle BDSM couple might approach a Holiday like BDSM. If they would make it purely vanilla or if they would incorporate some of their lifestyle into it - perhaps not sexually but along the lines of the mother having to be respectful and submissive in how she receives her gifts.

I almost never see good Holiday stories.

I am writing this story with esteemed SOL Author Fanfictionman.

You may have read his incredibly epic and salacious version of how season 8 of Game of Thrones should worked.

You might have read his "Fuller House" fan fiction?

We are taking turns writing a really fun mind comtrol story set in the TV series "Modern Family"

I don't know where he will take his chapter. So I'm just as excited to see it as you are and then I build my chapter. We continue round robin like that.

Obviously mind control requires both authors to agree on the limits of how mind control works and the general rules of conditions and triggers. We worked that out mutually.

The story begins with Luke Dunphy trying mind control tea on his sisters. The tea is placebo so when he asks them to show him their boobs they toss him out on his ass.

The vow to teach him a lesson and use real hypnosis on him. Naturally they also test it on themselves to be sure he isn't just playing along.

It only builds from there. It's a lot of fun and the chapters are short. Please check it out and give feedback.

We could all use some good news. This pandemic is really messing with us all.

I don't have as much time to write due to the pandemic but I am continuing on with the "Keeping my sister in line" thanks to overwhelmingly positive feedback.

There were a few people who felt like downvoting the story, and sending me nasty grams but for the most part it was positive. I even had one guy say that I messed up by adding a black guy to the story.

I hadn't added a black guy to the story but just because he said that I am definitely adding SEVERAL black guys to the story - with really big dicks and they are going to fuck the ever loving shit out of some pretty white girls.

I was recently made aware that I have some kind of "formula" to my stories.

https://twitter.com/CurvyBandida/status/1256000490619297792?s=09

I believe this is a mother and a daughter who do porn together sometimes on Twitter - love the picture. They lead a crazy lifestyle. I tend to write about people like them meeting people like me (who are boring).

All of my stories tend to follow a "formula" of some kind on the surface. There are some standard characters - the awkward teenager, the bitch, the well trained slave, the nice guy, etc - they don't all have the same face/facets but you'll see them in all my stories usually.

They also tend to have a "Disruptive event" - discovery of peeping, blackmail, a new policy with the landlord, family visit, vacation. The event can be positive, negative, neutral depends on your perspective. I began with some sort of bang that is going to change someone's boring little life.

Once I have the people and the event I start writing. I don't usually know where it's going to go but I usually start taking them on some journey - where at least one character transforms during the story from what you thought they were into something else. I tend to zig and zag around in the story so that the reader doesn't always predict where it is going to go.

In Keeping my Sister in Line - I establish the basic protocols around the house for discipline. I spend a little time letting the characters stumble and learn from mistakes. I've got them heading out of the house to the mall to learn how to act in public.

The problem I have is often with endings. I typically fall in love with the characters and don't want to end the relationship. I might also fall out of love with the characters and want to move on.

Like a pilot - the landing is the most important part of the whole operation. It's not that hard to take off, its easy to keep it up in the air - but landing is the one where if you fuck it off you don't get many people that want to ride with you again.

That's always the challenge - is saying goodbye to the characters and leaving them on their journey.

I'd love to make every story epic 30+ chapters. The problem is I could have also written three shorter stories in that time that may have been appealing as well. The challenge I will have with this one is knowing when and how to end it because I really feel like there is so much potential with these characters to watch them develop.

Its a good problem to have.