Eddie Davidson: Blog

I was reading some today. It went something like this:

Hand sanitizer glistened on their hands as they kept their social distance. She reached for him and he reluctantly allowed her to get close enough to touch him. He knew he would need to be tested right away after.

She reached down between his legs and felt a hard bulge. She asked him if he was ready.

"Oh yes, that is my thermometer. I brought it with me in case I need to take my own temperature. I am afraid I can't permit you to use it though due to the high risk."

"I am so hot!" she said.

"Is it possible you are showing signs of the coronavirus?" he asked.

She told him no but she was ready to do the nasty, so they both masturbated to Twitter porn while maintaining six feet apart at all times and wearing their masks.

I started writing stories inspired by one I found on Aastr that inspired me to start writing.

It was fascinating because it was done entirely in dialogue. I've never seen that done well until I read this story. No action description but the reader is able to perfectly follow along.

The story begins with a father telling his teenage daughter to take her panties all the way down and prepare to be spanked. Naturally, she feels she is too old to be spanked this way but we get the impression this has happened plenty of times in the past.

There is a lot of humiliation and BDSM when the wife turns out to be a submissive. The neighbor boy comes over and says he thought he saw a woman with nipple peircings nude in the backyard.

The dad makes his wife come out and drop her robe "Now this is important, boy. Did the peircings look anything like these?"

Unfortunately, the story was never finished.

I decided rather than try to finish the story to do a series of short homages to it. Stories in the spirit of that initial tale that got me into writing.

I don't write in "dialogue" only though. I am not that good of a writer. I may give it a try one day but it is more traditional storytelling. I usually do 1st person from a single perspective to give the reader something to relate to in the telling of the tale.

Every now and then I do birds eye view third person as well.

Case in point (and why I am writing this blog today) is
"Keeping the womenfolk in line -Karen's Tale"

It was originally called "Your face would look good between my legs". However, I was never happy with that title. Now that I've added some chapters I renamed it. The link is located here;

https://storiesonline.net/s/22519/your-face-would-look

It tells the story of a woman and her son visiting her sister. They have travelled across the country and have no where else to go. Her sister earns her money working out of her trailer selling ass on the Internet. She lives with her two hot daughters, young son and husband. The family is just like any other all-american family. They love each other, have squabbles etc.

I hope you will enjoy it. The feedback has been "mostly positive".

One other notes: Thanks to my friends I am often able to go back and fix my mistakes. I don't have a regular editor to help me. If you see a grammar or consistency mistake in my chapter please let me know.

If they're not from America it's preferably like any other day.

However I was picturing a BDSM couple with a few kids and how they spend their normal daily lives. Maybe the wife is submissive in the father is the head of the household

What would 4th of July weekend be like for them?

Mundane and vanilla for some of it probably.

I could picture shooting off some bottle rocket sticking them up the wife's ass and firing them out side

It would make a great short story.

With Chapter Six I am turning on voting.

I wanted to create a story that was a little different than my norm - about a trashy family that lives in trailer park (okay, thats my norm) that involves (BDSM/Humiliation/incest) okay thats my norm.

Still - I think this set up and the pacing is very different than usual for me.

The story is about a stuck up prude and her son coming to live with her trashy sister who works as an escort. In this day and age, there are lots of women who live off Twitter and the Internet as sex workers. Betty is simply one of them. Her kids know, and they are fine with it, but they don't really get involved. They know guys show up and leave happy but that's about it.

I was hoping to paint a very realistic and plausible picture of the alternative lifestyle some families really do lead. I know a woman quite like Betty and she makes her living off webcam - and thats something her family just has to deal with/accept. It pays the bills very well.

I am curious now that chapter six is posted (scheduled to be posted anyway) that the story is turning a corner where you see things going and what you'd like to see yet.

I do have some other stories in the fire I need to continue as well - its just tough right now and will be slow during the summer months.

Many of us (me, anyway) would love to read some Father's Day themed stories this weekend.

In 2020 we have so much going wrong, it would just be fun to live vicariously through a Father's Day story on here.

Here are some random story starter thoughts:

How would a Father's Day work in a BDSM Household where the Father is the Dominant and the mother is the slave? Especially if she is not permitted to own anything?

How about if it was a Female Led Relationship, and the girls of the house run things, how would they treat Father's Day if Dad is the submissive house maid?

How about a Father's Day gift that is extra special or even super natural?

The go-to gift is a new Tie. What if it was about getting Tied up instead?

What if Daughter moved away and became a cam girl with a bunch of her freaky friends. Dad turns out to be a customer - daughter comes home to visit for Father's Day.

What about this idea: Dad has a fantasy about Hypnosis. His wife and daughter have read his browser history, its full of dirty stories. They agree to pretend to be hypnotized by him all weekend no matter what he asks as a gift. They make a bet that neither will chicken out - thinking he won't get too pervy they both do this as a way to give him the best father's day weekend ever.

How about a Vacation? The family takes an exotic trip and gets captured by some local sheriff and humiliated - turns out, it was an all inclusive roleplaying thing that the mom paid for.

Bad Dad - he is kind of a strict disciplinarian and his girls are always getting in trouble. Father's Day he wants them to be angels but they act like little devils. What's a dad to do?

How about just some kinky shit? I don't care - write.