Eddie Davidson: Blog

Challenge to all authors this weekend.

It's Mother's day weekend.

We all need a break from bad news and so how about a good old fashioned story challenge?

Time to write a story about mothers.
It could be sweet.
IT could be sexy.
It could be about BDSM
It could be about a dominant mother who is meeting her daughter's husband for the first time.
It could be about a submissive mother who is meeting her daughter's husband for the first time.
It could be whatever the hell you want.

Include:
Mother's Day Story Challenge: in the title of your story.

Let's see how many we can get this weekend!!
No voting, no contest - no judging - everyone wins. Write something about mothers or if you prefer write about some motherfuckers. That works too!

I am personally always curious how a lifestyle BDSM couple might approach a Holiday like BDSM. If they would make it purely vanilla or if they would incorporate some of their lifestyle into it - perhaps not sexually but along the lines of the mother having to be respectful and submissive in how she receives her gifts.

I almost never see good Holiday stories.

I am writing this story with esteemed SOL Author Fanfictionman.

You may have read his incredibly epic and salacious version of how season 8 of Game of Thrones should worked.

You might have read his "Fuller House" fan fiction?

We are taking turns writing a really fun mind comtrol story set in the TV series "Modern Family"

I don't know where he will take his chapter. So I'm just as excited to see it as you are and then I build my chapter. We continue round robin like that.

Obviously mind control requires both authors to agree on the limits of how mind control works and the general rules of conditions and triggers. We worked that out mutually.

The story begins with Luke Dunphy trying mind control tea on his sisters. The tea is placebo so when he asks them to show him their boobs they toss him out on his ass.

The vow to teach him a lesson and use real hypnosis on him. Naturally they also test it on themselves to be sure he isn't just playing along.

It only builds from there. It's a lot of fun and the chapters are short. Please check it out and give feedback.

We could all use some good news. This pandemic is really messing with us all.

I don't have as much time to write due to the pandemic but I am continuing on with the "Keeping my sister in line" thanks to overwhelmingly positive feedback.

There were a few people who felt like downvoting the story, and sending me nasty grams but for the most part it was positive. I even had one guy say that I messed up by adding a black guy to the story.

I hadn't added a black guy to the story but just because he said that I am definitely adding SEVERAL black guys to the story - with really big dicks and they are going to fuck the ever loving shit out of some pretty white girls.

I was recently made aware that I have some kind of "formula" to my stories.

https://twitter.com/CurvyBandida/status/1256000490619297792?s=09

I believe this is a mother and a daughter who do porn together sometimes on Twitter - love the picture. They lead a crazy lifestyle. I tend to write about people like them meeting people like me (who are boring).

All of my stories tend to follow a "formula" of some kind on the surface. There are some standard characters - the awkward teenager, the bitch, the well trained slave, the nice guy, etc - they don't all have the same face/facets but you'll see them in all my stories usually.

They also tend to have a "Disruptive event" - discovery of peeping, blackmail, a new policy with the landlord, family visit, vacation. The event can be positive, negative, neutral depends on your perspective. I began with some sort of bang that is going to change someone's boring little life.

Once I have the people and the event I start writing. I don't usually know where it's going to go but I usually start taking them on some journey - where at least one character transforms during the story from what you thought they were into something else. I tend to zig and zag around in the story so that the reader doesn't always predict where it is going to go.

In Keeping my Sister in Line - I establish the basic protocols around the house for discipline. I spend a little time letting the characters stumble and learn from mistakes. I've got them heading out of the house to the mall to learn how to act in public.

The problem I have is often with endings. I typically fall in love with the characters and don't want to end the relationship. I might also fall out of love with the characters and want to move on.

Like a pilot - the landing is the most important part of the whole operation. It's not that hard to take off, its easy to keep it up in the air - but landing is the one where if you fuck it off you don't get many people that want to ride with you again.

That's always the challenge - is saying goodbye to the characters and leaving them on their journey.

I'd love to make every story epic 30+ chapters. The problem is I could have also written three shorter stories in that time that may have been appealing as well. The challenge I will have with this one is knowing when and how to end it because I really feel like there is so much potential with these characters to watch them develop.

Its a good problem to have.

Normally, I wait until chapter seven to turn on voting. I assume that gives people enough time to know if the story held their interest and they can form an opinion on what they would like to vote for the story.

However, I felt chapter five is really hot and exciting. It adds a twist to the story that I hope most did not see coming.

I have received some positive feedback on this story. I do have to say that I owe a lot of this to Mike McGifford who has tirelessly edited this thing in the background. I can't keep posting a chapter a day without wearing him out - lol.

I do have several chapters in the process of edit now. However, I wanted to ask you how long you want the story to go?

Do you see this as a short teaser for a bigger/more fun story?

Do you want it to be a medium one/typical of my stories?

Do you want this to be an epic like HOA or Do you have a big dick? why not?

Every story can't be an epic - and while I am writing this I can't go back to other stories and finish them/start new ones. If this is something you enjoy though I have a lot of ideas for the future with where this is going.

Do the characters ring true?

I realize many are similar to past characters I've written but they also have some unique differences. I enjoy playing with mischeivous bitches who deserve some justice/karma.

I also like to include women who know what they are and what they want and enjoy submission like Gloria(cherry) the mom.

As an author, I enjoy the evolution of characters. If they start out awesome/confident/knowing everything they have no where to go but down. I am loving Teddy's timid exloration of his new world.

If you haven't checked it out yet, but are a fan of my stories - please let me know what you think.

I am in final edits on the final chapter(s) of Slut Summer School.

Readership dropped WAY off for this series. I feel bad about that. It still has good votes and a healthy amount of initial interest. That is in part my own fault for leaving it for so long.

However, I realized as I was writing it that I was losing my interest in finishing the story.

I love the chase and the breaking of the girl. I loved the part about teaching her lessons and punishing her for her mistakes. However, I reached the part where she was learning from her mistakes and was having self-realizations and it was less enjoyable to finish the tale.

I put it on the shelf for a long time - so the readership interest loss is my own fault.

I do plan to polish up a few of my other older stories and add a little more to the end.

However, for my next project I am going to do a story about a girl who is caught watching her parents BDSM sessions through an Alexa type device in their home. She has been watching with her little brother. He initially introduced her to it (but rather innocently).

In the process, she gets curious about it and subjects him to some of what she sees their parents doing. The parents catch her and decide that the younger brother is allowed a measure of payback.