Eddie Davidson: Blog

Many of us (me, anyway) would love to read some Father's Day themed stories this weekend.

In 2020 we have so much going wrong, it would just be fun to live vicariously through a Father's Day story on here.

Here are some random story starter thoughts:

How would a Father's Day work in a BDSM Household where the Father is the Dominant and the mother is the slave? Especially if she is not permitted to own anything?

How about if it was a Female Led Relationship, and the girls of the house run things, how would they treat Father's Day if Dad is the submissive house maid?

How about a Father's Day gift that is extra special or even super natural?

The go-to gift is a new Tie. What if it was about getting Tied up instead?

What if Daughter moved away and became a cam girl with a bunch of her freaky friends. Dad turns out to be a customer - daughter comes home to visit for Father's Day.

What about this idea: Dad has a fantasy about Hypnosis. His wife and daughter have read his browser history, its full of dirty stories. They agree to pretend to be hypnotized by him all weekend no matter what he asks as a gift. They make a bet that neither will chicken out - thinking he won't get too pervy they both do this as a way to give him the best father's day weekend ever.

How about a Vacation? The family takes an exotic trip and gets captured by some local sheriff and humiliated - turns out, it was an all inclusive roleplaying thing that the mom paid for.

Bad Dad - he is kind of a strict disciplinarian and his girls are always getting in trouble. Father's Day he wants them to be angels but they act like little devils. What's a dad to do?

How about just some kinky shit? I don't care - write.

If not for Vulgus - I would not be writing.

There is no doubt in my mind about that. His stories were such a huge turn on for me.

I didn't think I could write. I have terrible grammatical habits. I dabbled at it. Most of the initial feedback I received was terrible and quite discouraging.

If you sort my stories by earliest - you will probably agree. I didn't have MS word or any spellcheck. I was doing the best I could with what I had at the time.

I think the ideas were solid - Naked in the trailer park was my take on the "Naked in the School" stories - except rather than focus on school, I wanted to focus on what happened around the trailer park.

My first real solid story was "Do you have a big dick, why not?"

It was about a woman who did webcam shows with her daughters. There are real women out there who do that. It's not that uncommon really. They were trashy girls who had been raised with loose morals.

In the story, the titular line happens when one of the girls introduces a boy to her. She asks him if he has a big dick, money or cocaine - because if not - why is he even talking to her. He is wasting her time without at least one of those things.

The story will take you on some twists and turns.

The next big one for me was "HOA: Big Day in Sunny Manor" - B.D.S.M is what Big Day in Sunny Manor stands for. I should have titled it "Big Dick in Sunny Manor" now that I think on that - but no one in the story had a huge hog.

Anyway, the idea there was that this vanilla family moves to a kink-friendly community in Tampa. (These also exist). In this case, the parents are into BDSM. They sort of underestimate just how freaky this place is.

I thought that was a great premise for a story. This is perhaps my longest story yet. I really enjoyed writing it. I was channeling a couple of my favorite stories when I wrote it. The unfinished "HOA" by Mister Archie, some of Vulgus's stories that involve groups of kinky-friendly communities, etc.

I wrote a lot of side characters into that story. It was fun to sort of tease about this living community that had a rich background. The guy who worked for the community manager's sister was one of the pony girls in his stable. She used to be a hot cheerleader in college - she made more money working as a show pony than she ever would have as a profesional cheerleader (or a stripper) though.

Anyway, I've written more short stories since then - by short I mean around 8-12 chapters each. They aren't epics. I have a lot of ideas and very limited time to write.

My most recent story is based on one of the first stories by Vulgus I ever read. I fell in love with the characters. At the end, I was asking "Okay, so what happens NEXT?"

Which is the sign of a great story.

I asked Vulgus if he would permit me to continue Lori's journey. My version is taking a few twists that I hope Vulgus would approve of. Lori asks her brother to do it to her again. She can't stop thinking about the kinky shit she did with him.

Vulgus hinted about some of it involuntarily turned her on when it first happened. It was all there in the subtext.

The problem I have is that the first chapter has FOUR THOUSAND downloads.

Every other chapter has bumpkis downloads.

That tells me that the first chapter sucks.

There is a dream sequence in that first chapter - because I wanted to set the tone for how wild Lori's fantasies were. I took a chance there with how I set up that chapter. It doesn't seem to have paid off.

If people aren't intrigued enough to click "next chapter" then it means I lost them as a reader.

On the other hand, maybe they busted a nut and just like a porn video on Porntube - they closed the browser and never came back to it.

In any case, the subsequent chapters are better (IMHO) - just nobody reading them.

So my question to you - is should I cap this one around chapter 8 and call it standing in the shadow of a giant like Vulgus? I mean he is a tough act to follow.

I have other stories I could work on. I also have a few still unfnished. Keeping my Sister in Line definitely had some excitement around it - with 31 comments on a 12 chapter story.

I'm a big fan of Vulgus. His writing is a huge inspiration to me. When I asked him if I could write a sequel to one of my favorite stories of his I was excited to get his blessing.

My brother's revenge was a short six chapter story. It left me wondering how Jeff and Lori dealt with each other after it ended.

I try to answer that question in my sequel. It's been slow going. My friend Mike has a project of his own and can't edit for me like he was. I'm sure I've got a few mistakes in the first three chapters of the sequel to Vulgus's story. Apologies in advance. If you notice any let me know.

I thought I would ask for feedback. I was being clever and start the story with Lori's recurring dream to immerse you into her psyche.

However, I think some readers were confused. It was intentional not to say 'this is a dream" at the start so when you see her awake it makes sense why she proceeds to confront Jeff.

Will you let me know how it reads to you?

I've concluded the Keeping my Sister in Line story. I have a chapter 16 but so far I am not happy with it - so it may end up as a bonus (boner) chapter.

I am still working with Fanfictionman on "Manny's Pills" - we take turns writing a chapter although we have gone a little out of order due to timing.

It's set in the TV show "Modern Family" and after Luke tries placebo mind control pills on his sisters - a chain of events begins involving hypnosis. We had to agree upon how it works in that world - triggers and conditions and the general rules of it. Then each author takes a turn.

I think we are nearing an end now though.

So - I am thinking about my next project. I have a few unfinished stories to futz with. However, I have an offer to make:

If you like my stories and want to propose some sort of setting - I am willing to try round robin story telling with you. You write the first chapter. I write the next. We take turns.
We each agree to maybe create three of the main characters independently and then create side characters as needed.

No particular setting but understand I am not particularly fond/good at writing sci-fi.

I've done fanfiction in the Goldbergs and Modern Family.
I've done fantasy in Game of Thrones.
I've done historical fiction set in 18th century Paris

But my forte is setting stories in either trailer parks and middle america suburbs in the modern period.

So pitch me an idea before you do anything and let's see if we tickle each other's fancies. I don't care who posts it. Only one of us can post to the story - so I would send you my chapter through the internal mail system.

Recently I disvovered Galtabs "central city" stories.

I have to admit at first I thought they may be generic but after reading them I really love the setting - but more so the writing.

So much so I dabbled with a fanfic "taking the kids to the zoo" based on her setting.

The part that I really enjoy is all the nuanced details. The story is never slow but it always seems to be on high definition of the world around the characters.

Always written current tense single Pov in 1st person. A difficult style for me to write but almost effortless.

I recently asked for mother's day stories. This one while set in Thanksgiving truly raises the bar even higher.

https://storiesonline.net/s/11841:227086/chapter-1-home-for-thanksgiving

I can't say enough good things about this story. If you like what I write, you will LOVE what she writes.