Clee Hill: Blog

Freshly proof-read, this chapter is now in the queue for reposting.

This time round, there have been some real changes, nothing important, but Leri has been brought a little more in line with how she is in other chapters, not least because now I know her a lot better than I did when she helicoptered into this chapter originally. Luke's role is also a tad expanded to cover his reaction to Leri's bikini in a more cohesive manner.

No retcons, but a little amplification.

Clee

Chapter ten, newly proofed, is in the queue for uploading.

Nothing major, just the usual tidying and spanking of goofs.

Newly proof-read, with some smoothing of the language and consistency of vocabulary, but nothing new.

In the queue.

Nothing major changed, just smoothed out some of the writing and made Leri a little more present, even if not actually there, yet.

Just to head-off those who've not yet messaged me about the slowdown of proof-read or new material, I'm dealing with the death of a close family member and a house move, either of which would derail the best of us, but both at once seems really unfair.

Basically, it's not easy to get my head in the right place to work on Luke's story when those things are still fresh.

So rest assured, it is coming, but this is one of those unforeseen times when a leg-break takes your bails.

Clee