Clee Hill: Blog

In the queue for posting.

This time there is a little more work on the dialogue of all the characters, but nothing that changes anything more than making voices more consistent over the whole of Book One and Book Two.

1:4 now in the queue for posting.

Not much has changed, some vocabulary tweaks to how Luke and Stef speak, and a little more hesitation before they cross the first of many bridges.

All in all, nothing that changes anything that necessitates a re-read unless you are a completionist.

Clee

1:3 is now proofed, tweaked in minor and unimportant ways in terms of plot, and in the queue for uploading.

Clee

Proof-read reposting, with minor and inconsequential edits so, unless you are a completionist reading along with the uploads, nothing changed.

Clee

Repost is queued up.

If you've read it before, there's nothing much changed other than a littly tidying of vocabulary.

Clee