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Proofed chapter seven in the queue.
Nothing major, just minor vocabulary smoothing and a couple of typos that got squashed.
Clee
Latest proof-read chapter is in the queue for posting.
Aside from proofing and vocabulary issues, this time there is a scenelet where Stef lets Luke into her thinking processes and he gets to see that Stef is not so much in a certain rush into things as he supposed. It doesn't change anything material, but it contextualises things a little.
Clee
In the queue for posting.
This time there is a little more work on the dialogue of all the characters, but nothing that changes anything more than making voices more consistent over the whole of Book One and Book Two.
1:4 now in the queue for posting.
Not much has changed, some vocabulary tweaks to how Luke and Stef speak, and a little more hesitation before they cross the first of many bridges.
All in all, nothing that changes anything that necessitates a re-read unless you are a completionist.
Clee
1:3 is now proofed, tweaked in minor and unimportant ways in terms of plot, and in the queue for uploading.
Clee
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